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Title: cool
Reviewed By: devils angel 115 On: March 22, 2006 10:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is so cool you should write more chapters you are great at it so write another chapter please you did a great job.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: devils angel 115 On: March 22, 2006 10:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is so cool you should write more chapters you are great at it so write another chapter please you did a great job.
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Reviewed By: Wild_Demon_Fury On: January 14, 2006 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! plz updaye! why are you waiting so long anyways? i just read it and im literally dieing to read more. you dont wanna fan to die do ya? plzplzplzplzplz update!
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Reviewed By: Kage_of_darkness On: December 31, 2005 20:20 CST
Comment/Review:
You sould make your chapters longer. update soon please(you had to leave it as a cliffy)
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update soon. Can't wait to see what Kagome turned into and hwat they do to Naraku.
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Reviewed By: Thief Lava [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon i love your story
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 15:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
you must write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!mooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 15:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
you must write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!mooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: pitchforks.........
Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i swear goddamit i am about to come afrter you with a pitchfork!!!!!!!!! the chapters are too short the susspense is (literally)killing me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *cries like a baby* plz write more HIEI/KAGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!FOREVER!!!!
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 10:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
...WOW! You better not make happen what I think you're gonna make happen!! Oh yea, I want a shadow fox too lol...*sigh* make another soon please^.^ ~Vadkakid~
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Title: NO!!!!!
Reviewed By: Katara [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT HANGING THERE...WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!! *Starts shaking author of htis great story*
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Title: YEAH!!!!
Reviewed By: Katara [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS SO TOTALLY RULES!!!
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I!!!LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!YOUR!!STORY!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: WhiteRose-Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 21:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was an OK chapter that explained some stuff but again plz try to make your chapters longer because I just can't get enough of the story! Keep up the good work! and I wish I had a shadow fox too :P
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Reviewed By: WhiteRose-Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 21:15 CDT
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I think this is the first fanfic that I've read where Sess and most of the other characters are killed off almost right away. That caught me off guard and was a great surprise! I hope there are more unexpected surprises in store in future chapters! Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading future chapters :P
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