| "For A Child's Smile" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 11:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this. The emotions that you portrayd were very real and very well written Thanks for sharing
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Reviewed By: Timar On: March 13, 2005 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I especially loved the interaction between hikaru and heero. The way that he slowly opened up but was so very afraid to was awesome. It was so sweet and touching to watch something like that. THis was beautiful, I hope that you have the chance to write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Silver thorns On: March 11, 2005 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great. The plot was great, the style of writing, hell even the angst was great. My favourite part was when we got to look inside Hikaru's mind. It was so mature and old but the things he questioned, his wishes and fears were all heartbrakingly young and childish.
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