| "Therapy of Each Other" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: bbbeleleana On: April 06, 2005 13:09 CDT
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too bad its oversoon. Did you post the whole chapter? Because for me it ends when Inuyasha gives her the pendant. I hope you can fix that soon. thanks, bbbeleana nihaoma83@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: April 06, 2005 02:12 CDT
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aw the story's gonna b over soon, but loved the recent chapters. the name thing is cool and who doesn't love a good lime once in a while hahah
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Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: RikuJ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is awesomely great! I love it! especially the names on their necks, its such a uniqe concept! About how old is Kagome mentally at the end of chap 24 btw? just curious. Anways keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 23:07 CDT
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Wow..that was a lot of updates for one day. Don't you have more chapters on fanfiction.net? And its further along there too.... Ah well. I do that sometimes... Great story.
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Title: aww
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 18:48 CST
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aww this is sucha cute story...please update soon i want to know how this is going to end
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Title: Authour's Answers
Reviewed By: SailorX On: March 25, 2005 09:12 CST
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OK, Group, it's me, if you read this. A lot of the stuff in the story are based off of the movie "Regarding Henry" With Harrison Ford (he gets shot in the head and starts from square 1 just like Kagome, but instead of falling in love with his trainer, he was a cool, funny black guy.) CPR wasn't used in the movie, it just gave an excuse for Inuyasha to get directly involved into the story, but CPR is used to jump start the heart back up. The story is done, I've just not posted it up all yet, but I will I promise... I have a ubber-super- busy life.... Till next time...
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Reviewed By: inugirlteen (NLI) On: March 24, 2005 22:19 CST
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i just finished all that you have up and I can't wait for you to update! I love it!
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Reviewed By: inugirlteen (nli) On: March 24, 2005 20:42 CST
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okay I really like your story plot so far but I just have one thing to say about chapter one: If a person is shot in the head, 99.9% chances say they are dead and I can sincerely say that CPR isn't going to do shit for them...
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Title: Balthasar250
Reviewed By: Balthasar250 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love all your writen work, all the emotions I experience while reading it all. However, there are a few things I would prefer to see from your professional style of writing to improve upon. PLLLEEEEAAASEE email me to discuss this matter. ok? Balthasar250@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
personally, (NOT BEING MEAN OR ANYTHING) i didn't enjoy it much because i don't think that inu can be so mean to kag in the first place. i think that you should have made them develop their feelings over time, instead of making him realize it while he's her 'doctor' (sort of).
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 17, 2005 21:53 CST
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wow your story's great, really unique plot. and Kagome noticing Inuyasha's special condition and pointing it out is hilarious! please update soon!
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Title: Just finished reading up to this chapter
Reviewed By: Balthasar250 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 06:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry for the mixup had some trouble submitting the review bellow! everything got jumbled as I tried to submit. Style of writing 8 Spelling and grammer 6 originality 10 enjoy factor 10 Overall rating 10
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Title: Balthasar250
Reviewed By: Balthasar250 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 06:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simlply love this story line, the tradagy, the feeling, and the overall emotions. I have yet to have finished reading the other fan fic. I took more liking to this story, than the other stories. Yet still, grammer and spelling and overall professional writing skill still needs improving. Great work on this one I would love to see this one published if you could get yourself permission from the copyright owner of the Inuyasha series, so you can get this approved for a either an alternate universe story or alternate time setting with other characters story line set in the Inuyasha Universe.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 00:34 CST
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I am glad you are back I know what it like to have phyical therapy myself.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like to the story so far please update and how are you doing hun?
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