| "Therapy of Each Other" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: inugirlteen (nli) On: March 24, 2005 20:42 CST
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okay I really like your story plot so far but I just have one thing to say about chapter one: If a person is shot in the head, 99.9% chances say they are dead and I can sincerely say that CPR isn't going to do shit for them...
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Title: Balthasar250
Reviewed By: Balthasar250 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love all your writen work, all the emotions I experience while reading it all. However, there are a few things I would prefer to see from your professional style of writing to improve upon. PLLLEEEEAAASEE email me to discuss this matter. ok? Balthasar250@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
personally, (NOT BEING MEAN OR ANYTHING) i didn't enjoy it much because i don't think that inu can be so mean to kag in the first place. i think that you should have made them develop their feelings over time, instead of making him realize it while he's her 'doctor' (sort of).
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 17, 2005 21:53 CST
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wow your story's great, really unique plot. and Kagome noticing Inuyasha's special condition and pointing it out is hilarious! please update soon!
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Title: Just finished reading up to this chapter
Reviewed By: Balthasar250 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 06:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry for the mixup had some trouble submitting the review bellow! everything got jumbled as I tried to submit. Style of writing 8 Spelling and grammer 6 originality 10 enjoy factor 10 Overall rating 10
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Title: Balthasar250
Reviewed By: Balthasar250 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 06:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simlply love this story line, the tradagy, the feeling, and the overall emotions. I have yet to have finished reading the other fan fic. I took more liking to this story, than the other stories. Yet still, grammer and spelling and overall professional writing skill still needs improving. Great work on this one I would love to see this one published if you could get yourself permission from the copyright owner of the Inuyasha series, so you can get this approved for a either an alternate universe story or alternate time setting with other characters story line set in the Inuyasha Universe.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 00:34 CST
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I am glad you are back I know what it like to have phyical therapy myself.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like to the story so far please update and how are you doing hun?
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww! That was so cute! Kagome's learning so quickly, that such a good thing. ^ - ^ Your story is so sweet. Please updae soon.
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Reviewed By: morbidvortex [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 17:34 CST
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I love this story. Its really sad all the stuff that she went through. You are a great writer.
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Reviewed By: Rose Healer On: March 12, 2005 15:31 CST
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your story is amazing, unlike any of stories I ever read before. KEEP IT UP!!
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Title: RoneMD
Reviewed By: RoneMD [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 12:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so interested in this story. Its well written. Keep up the good work and update soon. I cant wait to see what happens next!!!!
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: An Old Reader On: March 11, 2005 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE BACK?! YAY!! YOU WERE GONE FOR SO LONG!! I was reading this on fanfiction and then you stopped and I was all "Noooo!!" But now you are back and I'm all "YAAAAY!" So please update as fast as possible so you can catch up to where you were before ^___^. This is a great story. Why wouldn't you want to make it long? Long stories are the best, especially when a great writer such as yourself is writing it. ^___^
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 19:44 CST
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Honey, you have got to do something about your formatting. I'm going to give you the same advice I was given when I posted my first story; Double space between paragraphs. As it is, your story is one big mish-mash that makes it confusing to try and read. Everything is jumbled together. - You have an interesting plot and I would like to read it but, frankly, I'm a little intimidated at the sheer bulk of words I'm looking at. You will probably get more readers if you reformat. -- I hope you don't take offence, none is meant.
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 16:22 CST
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Inu can be so mean!!! *sigh* Oh well, Update soon!!!
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