| "Poison" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Fantastic
Reviewed By: lostprophet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, great story. Definiatly one of my favorite stories. Grammer was perfect (which is awesome!) as well as...for lack of a better term, "plot". Very nice writing all together. Something about this just screams for more. Obviously, being a one-shot, its not going to have anymore. But hey, it'd be cool if there were ;).
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Title: Poison
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 18:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Animeluver1368 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked, no spelling errors. Thats a big plus. But overall it was a very good lemon.
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Reviewed By: Kogas Hentai Luver [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was just hot as hell. Very nicely done.
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Title: Darklover1
Reviewed By: Hayashi Panthera [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad at all lots of lemony goodness and nice little cliffy to make the reader scream " why isn't there more!!!!!". any way good job and keep writing! ^^
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Title: Very nice!
Reviewed By: AngeliaOmen On: March 12, 2005 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my this was magnificent I simply loved it. You made InuYasha seem so cruel with Kagome when he was punishing her. I almost felt sorry for her and just wanted to grab the Baka violently shake him and say "Gods, InuYasha please I love you give it to me already!" Heh but yes very nice indeed.
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