| "the begining of the end" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Lady Morrigan On: September 14, 2005 02:45 CDT
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Oh my Goddess, an 15 year old mother? How horrible. Teens really need to plan this whole sex-epade thing-- I think stories like this should put a little more emphasis on using protection. Other than that, the story was great, but maybe you should have written the sex scene all the way through. (lol)
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Reviewed By: katerpilet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 17:58 CDT
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Hot like heck, loved the detail, come out with more soon.
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Reviewed By: fanatic11 On: March 26, 2005 16:38 CST
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Its wuite interesting. Hope you keep up the great work ^^
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