| "Glass Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: BelleFaerie88 On: June 03, 2005 10:20 CDT
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Oh my, that was the most beautiful fanfiction i have ever read. I still have tears in my eyes. That was sad, almost like a new version of Romeo and Juliet. It was awesome. Keep on writing, u are real good at it!
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Reviewed By: thyme cat On: May 16, 2005 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written. Sad is good sometimes as a contrast to all the sappy happy romantic stories; not all stories end well in reality and it's a good thing to remember. I would be interested in how you think these characters passed the time to grow into the characters you used. Meaning, your characters act differently from the characters in the original story, so why did they grow and change?
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: SesshomarusGirl On: April 29, 2005 15:28 CDT
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That was so sad! But, I'm confused. Did they do it, or was it a daydream? Did you have a mistype, because they made it seem like it was a dream and then Jaken came and took her too the battlefield. I'm just wondering, but otherwise it was VERY good. Straight 10s!
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr (logged out) On: April 14, 2005 23:51 CDT
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such a sad story, but a very good one. i was glad to beta this for you. i love your work and i will gladly beta any others for you. keep up the good work.
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Title: notlogin
Reviewed By: Amonlover11 On: March 15, 2005 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was Beautiful truly it was I have read many things on this site but your story is got to be one of the Greatest ::bows in repect::
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Reviewed By: cute_kirrara16 On: March 14, 2005 22:27 CST
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i like your story sad as it is. it made me cry but you did a great job.
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Title: -_-,
Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 19:01 CST
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*bawls* i dislike sad stories 'cause they make me cry! This is a good story, even if it made me cry, though...great job *leaves bawling at the top of her lungs*
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 16:32 CST
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OMFG, that was so sad, i started to cry, literally. it was also romatic!
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