| "Chaos and Fun" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: boo i c u
Reviewed By: me On: June 04, 2005 03:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story so far just few spelling errors. tomahome is spelt tamahome and keiska is spelt keisuke. hehe. update soon, k
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Reviewed By: fushigiyugifan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was ok there were a few parts where u got the names mixed up. othere that that i liked it
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