| "Breathe" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just one word AWESOME
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Reviewed By: Izumi Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 23:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
While I understand the concept of this being a songfic, you didn't really need the lyrics. I completely ignored them and the story didn't lose anything. You managed to fit the attitudes of Vegeta and Bulma into this real well. You left it at a point where Bulma understood Vegeta enough to know he cared, even if he wouldn't openly admit it. Her reasoning for leaving Yamcha and the pain over Goku's death. Basically, you covered everything Toriyama missed at the end of Cell Saga. Something that's always good to see.
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Reviewed By: Bra ROX! On: February 03, 2007 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D this fic makes bra smiley! THis is an aweosme oneshot! I lurved it :) I was so sweet and omg... ahhhh so kewl.... I LURVED IT KEEP UP THA GEWD WORK
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Reviewed By: Baby Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 00:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was really sweet, I loved it. You really explained their feelings for one another. You are an excellent writer, please continue. |
Reviewed By: swimmerstuff On: January 03, 2003 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i always like you fics, their always so beautiful. i liked the song. and you made the characters really come to life. |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2002 09:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I forgot to say, this song is perfect ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2002 13:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Love your fic. Very heart felt and emotional. Good job. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 02, 2002 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolute brilliance!!!! |
Reviewed By: Mademoiselle On: November 10, 2001 07:38 CST
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This is entirely at your best! I love stories in which they make up, utterly beautiful. |
Reviewed By: Ember On: November 10, 2001 08:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Fluff at it's very best! How much do i live this fic? There are no words to do it justice *^_^* |
Reviewed By: Veggie-Trunks On: November 10, 2001 10:26 CST
Comment/Review:
That was beautiful! That...was so deep...and...and...I don't know! Gosh, I can't even put what I want to say into words! They had all that emotion and thought and things and they each only said one line! It was like I could see them! You are truly a great writer! |
Reviewed By: Veggie-Trunks On: November 10, 2001 10:26 CST
Comment/Review:
That was beautiful! That...was so deep...and...and...I don't know! Gosh, I can't even put what I want to say into words! They had all that emotion and thought and things and they each only said one line! It was like I could see them! You are truly a great writer! |
Reviewed By: Emmie On: November 10, 2001 17:10 CST
Comment/Review:
omg..you are truly a gifted writer. So much emotions and inner battles...and they only said one line each! you put so much emotion into the two spoken lines! "i won't leave you again woman"
"i know vegeta" ~ omg those 2 lines are heavy with feelings and OMG i just don't know how to describe it in words. all in all a very sweet and nicely done v/b fic. |
Reviewed By: Cait (nicksgurl) On: November 12, 2001 18:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Omg I luved it! It wuz so sweet! I'm such a sap for great luv stories cuz I got non o my own *sniff* But soon i will find my nick (carter)! HA!...Sorry. But it's stories like this that keep me goin. Keep it up!! |
Reviewed By: Chatcat On: November 13, 2001 14:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh wow! That was amazing! I loved it, how romantic and sweet, i Was nearly in tears! You should really consider writing real books! |
