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Reviewed By: Evil Fang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 01:44 CST
Comment/Review:
eeheheheh ahahahhAHAHAHAHHA SHE PEED ON HIS SHOES AHAHAHAAHHAHA omg thats so funny. He is a total idiot "Marking her teritory" Wtf is with that. SHE PEED ON HIS SHOES. Anyways it was funny and a loved it write more.
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Reviewed By: jackialioncourt On: January 25, 2006 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter thanks for updating
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!! I so love the internal dialog going on with Kagome. It is so rich and humorus. Great job. I look forward to more from you so that I can laugh and relax after a full day of work or school or just a time when I need a good laugh. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 18:39 CST
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ROFLOL ahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!! Oh I just love that. This is trully a comedy. That's great so far. I just finished ch2 and now I am on to ch3.
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Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 14:06 CDT
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HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA AH!!!!!!!!! wait, ah? what the hell? anyways, if you didn't notice, that was funny and i loved it *hugs writer* update soon! and his poor shoes!!!! oh well, he's still damn hot!!!!
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Reviewed By: Palo On: April 06, 2005 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Oh my GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant believe she peed on Mr. Sexy Ass... that was totally hilarious!!!!!!
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Title: Jackia
Reviewed By: Jackia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SHE DID????? I WOULD'VE TAKEN FLUFFY'S OFFER WITHOUT A SECOND THOUGH! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's safe to say that all fangirls agree... Sesshomaru looks damn good in Armani! Yum.... Oh, yeah! Keep going! This is great.
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Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 14:53 CST
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Cool!!!!!!!! I love where it is so far, but, Armani? I mean really all the sesshy lovers (Including myself) would probobly be more happy with, Tight ass jenes and no shirt, but still acceptible. write more damn it!!!!!! 'k bye...
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Title: Cool...
Reviewed By: Zillah On: March 16, 2005 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, that was very funny....yeah.....*stops, scratches head, shakes head* Anyway...please write more!
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Title: Well, what do you know?
Reviewed By: swasdiva On: March 16, 2005 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a GREAT beginning!! You are a master of sarcastic wit! It was short, but direct, and the quick language instantly sucked me in. I can't wait to see where this fabulous farce goes!! Please keep it up!!! And a wickedly grinning Fluffster in ARMANI? Glad you can't see the drool decorating my computer screen!
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Title: hurry(please)
Reviewed By: eagerly waiting On: March 15, 2005 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really really want to find out what Fluffy tries to do to Kagome. The suspence is killing me(in case you can't tell I am not very good at waiting.Please finish it soon. Unless that was the end. Please don't let it be the end. You did a very good job and should be very proud of yourself. But please finish it.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous ^___^;; On: March 15, 2005 21:38 CST
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Fun! Really funny too! I love your sense of humor! Except for 'heat attack' instead of 'heart attack' it was really really good! Of course..I guess it could be a heat attack...*wink wink* *is smacked upside the head* You idiot keep it a PG rating, Miss Anonymous! ...idiot... ^___^ really good ^___^ many many points go to you
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Title: Jackia
Reviewed By: Jackia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fluffy in an Armani? *drools* Cant wait to read what he's doing in Kagome's house Fluffy in an Armani? *Drools...*
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 21:19 CST
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I absolutely love your sense of humour! It's nice to know someone else finds that kind of stuff funy. Anyway, From the, what? three? four paragraphs you have written, i can already see you have a very nice writing style. You have managed to somehow summarize almost the entire inuyasha plotline in 500 words or less. That has to take some sort of talent. I laughed out loud at that last image, right before i started in on some serious drooling. Sesshoumaru in armani...mmmmm...*ahem* Anyway, what i'm trying to say here is that i really want to see what kind of story you're going to come up with here. I look forward to seeing what it's going to be. So go forit! Update to your heart's content. I promise i won't try to stop you.
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