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Title: update!
Reviewed By: update! On: July 28, 2006 15:32 CDT
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when can we expect an updatE? you are so evil! suspense sucks!
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Reviewed By: Me On: June 06, 2006 23:05 CDT
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Well, so that's why your account got messed up huh? Interesting. Considering I post p0rn there and no one's shut me down... yet. Use the Chidkazu account then if you want. I removed Awakening earlier. Oh yes! Msn was mean, and I never got to tell you that it was a really good chapter! I've prolly told you b4, since I've read it, how many times now? LOL! type up 7 soon for your impaitient reviewers! They keep thinking you gave up! Love ya! Caitlin
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Title: please Update!
Reviewed By: ChibiReicheru On: May 30, 2006 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic please update soon!!!!
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Title: Loved it! ^_~
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 00:50 CST
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Suprisingly I liked it, b/c RyoxRose pairings make me slightly sick to my stomach, and right now I want to hurt Rose, but it was a really good story, and i can't wait for an update!
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Title: Loved it! ^_~
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 00:50 CST
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Suprisingly I liked it, b/c RyoxRose pairings make me slightly sick to my stomach, and right now I want to hurt Rose, but it was a really good story, and i can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: Takara On: August 11, 2005 03:40 CDT
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Weee. I just read all four chapters, and I'm quite intrigued. I demand that you update as I'm now fidgeting and wanting to know what's going to happen next. Though one things I have to say is that Dee calling Ryo Randy just doesn't feel right. Can't wait to see how that goes.
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Reviewed By: gddsinferno On: June 02, 2005 15:46 CDT
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I am glad to see you updated. I thought that you gave up on this story here. I am looking forward to reading the rest of this story now with all the emotions that you have written in these chapters. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Freaky Yaoi Girl On: April 24, 2005 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I enjoy reading this fic, its well written. and I like finding these fics that are a different plot. To have rose and ryo together before Ryo meets dee is an angle i really find interesting. So i really hope you will get a new chapter up soon. Keep up the good work ^_^
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Reviewed By: gddsinferno On: April 19, 2005 14:08 CDT
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I am glad to see that you updated. I thought that you gave up on this story. It was a liitle bit short but at least you updated. I do hope to see another chapter up soon.
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Reviewed By: Jiki On: April 18, 2005 07:33 CDT
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I'm reading his and I really like your style of writing, please update
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Reviewed By: gddsinferno On: March 26, 2005 14:56 CST
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I am glad to see that you have updated. This chapter was awesome it had a lot of action and which kept me held over. Though I do hope to see you update as soon as possible because you just can't leave me hanging with a ending like this.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Jen_roc18 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome fanfic, Im really proud of you spunky considering that this was your first! I'm looking forward to the next installment! You now how impaient I am so it had better come soon. Congrats on that one scene (wink wink) i think you know which one, if you need any pointers don't hesitate to ask. lots of love Jen
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Title: Does every revies have to be serious??
Reviewed By: gddsinferno On: March 16, 2005 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you are switching partners arould it adds some more depth and more to twist it around. I think a little more details could be used, but on the other hand I really enjoyed it.I hope to see you continue with it because I can't wait to see how you will be pulling everything together.
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Reviewed By: NeekerBreeker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never heard of anyone being promoted straight from detective to commissioner. You do realise that the commissioner runs the entire *station*, don't you? That just seems highly unbelievable to me. You know, if you don't feel quite ready to dive into the world of mansex, there's really no reason to do it. This fic could work fine without sex scenes. Just let the romances build - after all, you can write about sexual tension without getting graphical and talking about penises. In fact, that's generally the best part even in NC-17 fics.
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