| "A Fatal Farewell" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Angel 673 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!
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Reviewed By: hellspixie18 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 06:38 CST
Comment/Review:
cute story. The chapters could be longer but the length of the first chap wasn't bad. hope ya update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl *not logged in* On: April 06, 2005 21:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yea, lemons will be good haha ^-^ Please put some lemons in please!! XD
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl *not logged in* On: April 06, 2005 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good!! ^-^ Please update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Baby_red On: March 22, 2005 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My sexy boy assassin will kill you if you don't update soon!I love the story and if you wish (hint,hint)you can add lemons later on in the story!!luv 'ya!!! :)
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