| "The Sparrow's Burden" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: Interesting...
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I finished reading the story. It was really interesting, but I've never seen Raven's healing abilities handled like that. It's usually not nearly that fast and it involves much less light. Actually, I don't think she usually glows at all. But interesting use of creative license. You should write more.
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Title: DO NOT DELETE THIS STORY!!!
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I repeat: DO NOT DELETE THIS STORY!!! I love the first chapter, and will probably review each chapter as I read it. I like the new platinum emotion, but is she supposed to be Instinct or something? What emotion is she? Perhaps I will find out by reading more of the story...
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