| "Kurama and landmines" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 11:42 CDT
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O.O oh...uh...maybe....you shouldn't have made them both dead! ...that's very interesting...yet scary and freaky. Please make another one on the subject, but don't kill anyone in it! But still, that was good...I think. O.o
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 27, 2005 09:07 CDT
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i liked this chapter. not happy you killed kurama but i like it. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 11:11 CDT
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I like your story a lot, but can you make a continuation of it? Instead of a death fic. I really actually don't like the pairings, sorry. But please make a continuation of it, I would really like that! ^_^. Tell me if your contining the story please.
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Reviewed By: Asylum_Sweetie On: June 22, 2005 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good so far, but I want to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 13:50 CST
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Oh, ignore that part about Kurama being intelligent enough to know what it was. I just kinda realized you made a note of that.
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 13:49 CST
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Ummmm.... Could you make him not dead, please? I'll put this story on my list so that I can see if you do anything else. But you know, Kurama spent over 16 years in human world-- don't you think he would know what a landmine is? And Kurama'a been blown up hundreds of times by super punches and youki-packed bombs from Karasu, and he still survived. Doncha think he would be able to move fast enough to get away from a HUMAN made explosion? He IS and upper-A class demon. But I still think it's a good story. It'll just be better if you write a separate part where he doesn't die or something.
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