| "Moving to California" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job sill like tthe story keeep up the good werk! ^_^
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Reviewed By: LadyPhoenix009 On: June 02, 2005 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, please update as soon as possible and i will keep reading and reviewing. *thinking about what else to say to keep author writing great story* OH, just keep making more of this series I love the Kai/OC pairings. UPDATE SOON I'M DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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Reviewed By: Silver89Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it and can hardly wait till you continue! ^___^ So please update!
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOve it! Mystery date, love I like it perfict chapter! tell your friend that song is sooo good! Ja ne keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: keeper232 On: May 10, 2005 17:28 CDT
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nice to see something good finally happens tala ( with his dad and nate having the girl he loves) :D but talk about about friction between Nate and Tala!!!! living in the same house XD Great work! hope you keep updating :)
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Reviewed By: Tany On: May 02, 2005 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've red this one from the toher place you used to have your fanfic. But i still love it! ^^ so please update soon again ^___^ masse klemmer fra Tany =DD (trine da men di vet hvem jeg er =33 )
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*panting8 wahahahaha i got hime of my tale again! and this time for good (behind sakota there is kai straped to a char and a cloth over his mouth so he could not yell at sakota) well he is out of the way... anyways I still like the story! I hop you update soon! Ja....*Kai excapes from bindings* aaaaaaaaaa G2G Ja ne! *runs away from the vary mad blue haired boy*
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Reviewed By: kia twee On: April 19, 2005 14:29 CDT
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gr8! but problem is......i've already read it in ff.net so plez update soon!
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Reviewed By: keeper232 On: April 16, 2005 18:22 CDT
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lol kai having a pillow fight XD! but poor tala :((( his dad is so mean >:( oh yea, great story i love it!!:D
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahaha I finly lost Kai took some pesaverinse but i t was worth it....anyways i like the story, good, sad (por Tala)I still love it! *sees Kai* OH MY GOD how did he find me! got to go, Ja ne! *runs away hopping Kai diden't see her*
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Title: hey hey Kani-Chan!
Reviewed By: MyStIC bLaCk PhOeNiX On: April 11, 2005 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Kani! fantastic!! well it always has been and always will be, i can't remeber did you finish California? oh well! maybe i should get an account on here.... anyways talk soon! Emi-chan x
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pants* Kai is a fast runner....I still like the story! keep up the good work! update soon please ok? *sees kai coming* oh god! well I got to run..until next time Ja ne(c-ya in Jap.) *runs awary as fast as I can* kai don't you have a beyblade practice or something to go to insted of chasing me!aaaaaaaa
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Reviewed By: =) On: March 30, 2005 17:56 CST
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Good job on the new chappies!!!
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Reviewed By: Jixnce [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
......How often do you update?? ....... Do you update every week or more then that? When you use to write on fanfiction you updated every week... That is until they took your stories down... Well Great Chapters!! Please Update Soon!!
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Title: kaNi its kAt =D
Reviewed By: flick_flea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can i give you anything less then 10?! well as you can probably guess i have figured out this site =D!! but i have read all of these chapters!! can you send them to me?! the last one that i read was preparing for christmas which is chapter 41!!! im so excited i want to read more!!! although i might have to go back to the beginning and read through it again, coz i think that i may have forgotten so things =P if you want as i re-read it (if i do re-read it that is =]) i'll check the grammer for you in the chapters that you havent posted!! huggles kat xoxo
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