| "Moving to California" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 10:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sakota:hay Sakota here again like the story still, please update soon *looks around* kai is still trying to kill me for all the revews I made to peaple who make him fall in love(like you) *sees kai with his loncher ready* well I better be going c-ya*runs away yalling kai is going to kill me!*Kai:"come back here Sakota! *holds up a dager*
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Reviewed By: GR On: March 27, 2005 22:23 CST
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Hmmm... can't wait to see more of destiny/kai =) and great story so far too
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Title: CoOoOooL!! -lol-
Reviewed By: Armith-Greenleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 19:08 CST
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Argh! how un-cool...i still don't know how to make proper use of the site -lmao- damn i have a mixture of songs stuck on my head...and i sing a part of a song and suddenly a part of a completely different song follows and so on...at the end i have a mixture, which btw gave an idea for our fic...remind me to tell ya -chuckles- blow the house!!! a.k.a. enchant the readers of MediaMiner with your fic!! yay! i know you will!!
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Title: Yo!!
Reviewed By: Armith-Greenleaf, AG, Shaman Queen...etc etc etc On: March 25, 2005 19:02 CST
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Man i'm tired...i spent the whole day studying calculus and finally i finished!! YES!! -coughs- yaaaaaay update!! aaah! i love your ficcy my friend!! on to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
liked the story! as I always say keep up the good work!^_^(behind Sakota there it kai with a knife) ok ok i hate the story! just put down the knife kai please!(kai leaves mummdling something about one day he should kell Sakota for telling writers to keep writing storys about him)I like it realy I do and i better go befor kai come back so c-ya!^_^
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Title: hi!
Reviewed By: MyOwnWorld [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 17:37 CST
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hehe it starts...lol ~Sharon
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Title: HI!
Reviewed By: MyOwnWorld [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 17:34 CST
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YAY!! i get to read it again!!! lol can wait till it gets to where it was on ff.net! ~Sharon
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Title: How's it doing?
Reviewed By: Armith-Greenleaf, AG, Shaman Queen -sighs- On: March 22, 2005 14:01 CST
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I have a song stuck on my head...a heavy one -lol- WE arrrre living in Amerrrrrika...Amerrrrrika...dude that's heavy -lmao-coughs- ahem i made a small pause on my study to review my friend...can't wait to reach the chapters 40's or so -chuckles- oh! and lemme tell ya this again -clears her throat- cover your ears: I LOOOOOOOOOOVE MOVING TO CALIFORNIAAAAAA!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAY! AND I GET TO SEE IT UPDATED AGAIN!!!!!!!! -cackles a laughter-
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Title: Yippie! Yup! Yep!
Reviewed By: Armith-Greenleaf, AG, Shaman Queen, Queen of Fluff, what else? -thinks- ah yes, there's also my tru name but I won't write it here -lmao- On: March 22, 2005 13:51 CST
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Ahhhh two more chapters, i can tell you're excited by updating -chuckles- that's cos we all wanna reach the point we ended hanging to!!!!! damn straight...darn most of the reviews are mine, ain't that cool or what? -lmao- the only thing that sucks ass is that the reviews can't by signed on like on ff.net but oh well -shrugs-
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far.....realy I do, can't what to i see kai come in.(kai is so hot) you didn't here that, you better forget I said that of I will need to go to my plan B(kill eneyone who menchens it) so please forget I said that.Well I hop you update soon C-ya! ^_^
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Title: Me again! -waves a hand-
Reviewed By: Armith-Greenleaf, AG, Shaman Queen -rolls her eyes and snickers- On: March 17, 2005 19:24 CST
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I did promise i'd review every chapter and for damn the chocolate i will -stubborn look-...-lol- -Glancing around the site- pretty cool -nods- just lacking some advertising right? ahem -lmao- i can relate to that...i'm gonna try and beg Coca-Cola and Pepsi so they advertise ds -lmfao- maybe that way it'll be read...oh you fucking know what????? I have 98 reviews!! just two more and i'll reach the 100! -drops to her knees to cry with more space- ain't it cool? -sniffs- damn...gotta go study, i've wasted like two hours and its 9:23pm already -chuckles- have to study some or else i'll be like freaking lost on my classes tomorrow. Talk ya soon my friend! well at least i hope so -chuckles- won't we talk in like wha? four days? -groans- peachy...note the sarcasm...
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Title: Sweet! And you can even put a bloody title to your review! Isn't it great or what?
Reviewed By: Armith-Greenleaf, AG, Shaman Queen, yah you know me -lmao- On: March 17, 2005 19:16 CST
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You have three reviews already!! And after this you'll have five, counting this one and another one for the next chapter -lol- ya know wha? I published Darkness Shine's first chapter already, haven't got any review though -pouts cutely- we have to talk about publishing Fiat Lux over here too, and we can also try and publish our fics in some beyblade fan websites, wouldn't it be cool? oh man i have to tell you some funny things that happened today -snickers- well, onto the next review! -points with her index to the front- Best Wishes from your partner in crime and comrade -laughs evilly-
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ya keep going ok I like this story(I'm vary picky so be happy)
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Title: This is like a bloody new world -glances around the site-
Reviewed By: Armith-Greenleaf, AG, Shaman Queen or what-fucking-ever -lmfao- On: March 16, 2005 17:36 CST
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This is cool...i'm getting an account right away, i wish i could read some fics over here but i can't, unfortunately but i'll read the MOST important one...guess which one? -smirks- Hey ya know wha? i was listening to some songs of hoobastank, i think i might have sent you the one that sounded kinda related to Kai and Dizzy, so if you need song about them there's that one (which i have to figure out which is cos i forgot -lol-) and alive from POD that i sent you looong time ago -lmao- -Sighs- i'm thinking on where we get to the point in where Kai will tell Dizzy how he feels like...and will Dizzy feel the same way? Will she fall for him along the way? Dun dun dun dun...stay tuned and you'll know -lmao- Lotsa hugs!
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Title: Ain't it cool?
Reviewed By: Armith-Greenleaf, AG, Shaman Queen whatever -lmao- On: March 16, 2005 17:29 CST
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Isn't it cool? I remember the day a read your story for the first time, well actually not the day -lol- but the monet yeah...i instally loved your story, it is so sweet -sniffs- i do really hope you get the tons of reviews you deserve my frined -nods- anyways moving to the next review -lmao- Hey, this site is way more 'techno' than ff.net -lmfao- Hugs from your friend!
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