| "Mutual Satisfaction" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: WinterSolstice1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
{(So sorry forgot to give the ratings)} **blushes in embarassment**
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Reviewed By: WinterSolstice1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 22:53 CDT
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I normally hate Kagome & Sess pairings because i prefer her w/ IY. This is deinately an exception. You write in such a captivateing & descriptive manner that i just couldnt hate it. I understand the person trying to give constructive criticism because there isnt much back story, but this are ones shots they are sapossed to be short. If an individual is looking or more than the bare facts then they should look for a story w/ more chapters rather than one shots. I disagree that there is little descriptiveness because this fic contains alot, that is one of the reasons im atracted to it. The lemon was extremely lovely too, not nasty. Despite my dislike for the pairing, i cannot deny the fact that this was amazingly written. There werent any disruptive spelling or gramatical erros either. I very much enjoyed this fic. Excuse the length of this review, but i prefer making reviews worth reading not half cock statements. Im sure authors prefer it that way, whether the review is good or critical.
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Title: Mutual Satisfaction
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 02:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: April 10, 2005 22:53 CDT
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OMG that was a great chapter and sooo cute. I can't wait to see what happends next so update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok um not trying to flame yea here but yeah the girl played with herself ok? But have something more descriptive next time? Yeah she played blah blah blah and then Sess came in and sex came into play. Not trying to be mean just it might attract more attention to your stories instead of people becoming tweaked at not alot of description ^_^ not trying to flame!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 11:51 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG I love this story its sooooooooo good you have got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: wynter89(mm) On: March 18, 2005 11:50 CST
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IT WAS VERY INERESTING, HOPE TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK. GOOD LUCK MAY KAMI-SAMA BE WITH YOU.
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Reviewed By: angelwing66 On: March 17, 2005 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a wonderful based story, explained everything quite clearly, and was very enjoying to read.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 15:12 CST
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::pouts:: that left ya sort of hanging. it was good. it would be nice if you continued though! ^_^
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