| "Natsu" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Name/Nick On: January 08, 2009 03:55 CST
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Glad you updated! Going great, keep at it
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Reviewed By: Name/Nick On: September 18, 2008 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style, spelling, and grammar are lumped together for me. I think that you are doing very well with both but your style isn't uniquely yours, which is how I would give it a 10. Its good but it doesn't have that factor that makes it different from others. Originality is 10 no doubt. I'm sure there's probably some of these cousin spin offs around but none of them as well written or thought out. Enjoyment 9, because I'm not sure of your updating status.
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Reviewed By: Teesha17 not logged in On: July 07, 2008 00:43 CDT
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lol for my sloth like abilities for not loggin in. I'm happy that this story has been updated. I had been wondering what had happened to it.
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Reviewed By: cherryb182 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 19:00 CST
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OMG!!! i luv this fic u hav got 2 update!!!!!! plz.plz.plz.plz.plz!!!!!!
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Title: so cool
Reviewed By: kitty_tsubasa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 18:14 CDT
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this fanfic is soooooo cooooool, please updateee and keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Teesha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 13:43 CDT
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You have to update!!!! You can't just keep us hanging! Then again I know how had it is with all the pressure from the reviewers but you're doing a great job!
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Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 15:43 CDT
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GREAT story! I love the plot, I liked how you made Syaoran seem like a little perv. It was really OOC for a lot of the chractors (with th exception of Touya) and how Yukito was staring at her chest. MWAHAHAHAHA! I LOVED that part! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 13:41 CST
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Hmm..this had me thinking..totally entertaining. You write really well.
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Title: for the sake of my sainity
Reviewed By: resivoir chronicles [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 09:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please for the sake of my sainity and all things pure and holy finish this story...PLEASE!!!!! PLEASE........... not to rush you or anything though
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Reviewed By: Karasaki230 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
luv this story plz update soon!like this very second!lol
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Reviewed By: kurisutaru-shingai On: June 18, 2005 19:48 CDT
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HEYY! awesomers story!!!!!!! plz write more soooooon! latess
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Reviewed By: Kisaki_NekoYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh!!! I love this story!!! Ahhhhh! You've got to update NOW!! Please!!!!! Thanks! =^.^=
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Title: MWUAUAHAHAHA
Reviewed By: pure hope [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AM BACK MWUAHAHAHAHAHAHA *cracks whip* now where hav u been *sniff* i hav been waiting SOOOO LONG for an update oh well i can fix that *chains author to computer* NOW WRIGHT MY PRETTY MWUAHAHAHAHAHAHA WRIGHT MY LITTLE WIGHTING SLAVE *cracks whip* MWUAHAHAHAHAHAHA AND DONT COME BACK UNTIL U HAV AN UPDATE MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
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Reviewed By: pure hope [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 17:17 CDT
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like the story please update soon i wanna no what happens
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Reviewed By: kenny is always grounded [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 20:16 CST
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Hello I like your story so far so update soon!!! Please.
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