| "Sweet Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: HOHOHOHOHOHOHO On: May 28, 2007 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice story though you didn't finish it!!! tsk tsk i'm ashamed(?) at u just leave a perfectly good fan fic like that (ok im scaring myself now) update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: sango_punk93 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEHE awesome stuff u got there DeE hehe u still suck, btw
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Title: bored - -
Reviewed By: sango_punk93 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 09:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: sango_punk93 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 09:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Font Color hi again
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: sango_punk93 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 09:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Font Color hi im still bored and mikki's still obessive over her skittles
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Title: u still suck dee
Reviewed By: sango_punk93 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i still think that you suck Dee. haha u use that nick name that i came up with for you LAST year...! Anyway i laugh at you cause you have to take an exam and i dont. so i laugh at you because u still suck i hate u mikki, even though ur not dee, im just doing this cause im freakin bored to death now a message from mikki who doesnt know u Hi!!! ^_^ ~mikki~ that was a LOVELY note mikki... ><
ur SOOOOO smart... not DONT ERASE THE 'GAY PRIDE' PICTURE MIKKI!!!!!!!!!!!! noooooooooooo!!!! *runs and chases mikki* Muhahahaha u'll never get me! *runs away eating some skittles*~mikki~ I WILL GET YOU! *chases mikki and pokes her when i catch up to her then pushes her to the ground and ties her up* Well thats the end of that bye dee! NO I CAN'T EAT MY SKITTLES!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO... *awarkard silence*...... *eats skittles anyway* -jen/ sango_punk93
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Title: Rawrz i know you
Reviewed By: sango_punk93 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
you suck D! haha i know you you go to my school!!! peesh i remembered when you pushed me yesterday when we bit each other anywayz you still suck ohhhzaaa you know what you should do? upload that one story where Kagome meets her father and he turns her into a demon or half demon whatever and then inuyasha walks in on them remember that one? you wrote it last year in ur composition book for english you should upload that story i think its a very good story! -jen
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Reviewed By: DragonChic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 02:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooo good i can't wait to read the next chapter please please update sooon :D
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Reviewed By: blkdragongirl On: September 27, 2005 20:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
He,he. that's funny
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Reviewed By: cristy On: September 26, 2005 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is great, while i don't know shit about style grammar spellling or what ever, i know what I like and this makes my list. You'ld get an awsome reveiw from me just because Your pre-chapter mental conversations are too cute, but i like the story too so big thumbs up to you
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Reviewed By: blkdragongirl On: September 17, 2005 14:07 CDT
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PLEASE update, i no u have ritten around 10 chappies, u wouldn't let me read them.....you haven't updated for around a year........ok more like 5 months, but that's still a long time...
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Reviewed By: blkdragongirl On: August 10, 2005 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story, d. just update a little more often.
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Reviewed By: mrw13 On: July 25, 2005 00:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
why must this story be sooo good to read so kagome looks more like inuyasha wait ARE THEY RELATED?????? pleeze update soon
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Reviewed By: Tqo On: April 07, 2005 07:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is pretty good, just try and separate when people are talking. It makes for good grammer and the fic much less confusing. Once you do that, you'll realize there isn't much narrative so try and write a bit more in between to make the story run more smoothly. Thank you!!! (If you want me to beta, I'm the quiet one.)
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Title: Ok
Reviewed By: lilmab207 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 10:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is she suppose to be dog or somthing i m getting confused here and what pass I have all these questions. You better anwser them with another story.
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