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| "Why Germany?" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 01:27 CDT
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Another fantastic story. You handled the relationships between the characters admirably. They seemed so real, it made me wish for and miss my own guy friends that I haven't got to hang out with in a while. Heero seemed slightly OOC in that he was kissing and snuggling with Duo in front of Relena. He seems to be more of a private person than that, and Duo at least had to realize that it is not fun feeling like a third wheel, especially if you are single. Some of the rock climbing lingo was a tad unfamiliar, but nothing I didn't figure out, it just seemed to get a bit thick. I loved the "That's my girl" "And mine" comments at the end!! It really says a lot about both of the guys' relationship with Relena, but also what they have both contributed to making her who she was. They both taught her a lot and really cared for her, giving them the right to call her theirs. Of course, now I must wonder how the group dynamic would change b/t the three when Relena started dating someone (and what the Gundam pilots would put that someone through!). Any chance you could write about that? I bet it would be awesome! Please? ^_^
| Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 11:37 CDT
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Really enjoyed this. Laughed quite a lot while reading. I thought that the ending was okay. I hope that you continue this series, I really enjoy when people don't Relena bash. She might not be my favorite character, but... Thanks for sharing
| Reviewed By: Ju On: July 16, 2006 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really nice view of Relena! I know this fic is more about her, but sometines I kind of missed more on Duo+Heero! Cause i'm adicted! I hope you write more on this series!
| Reviewed By: poserpoet On: May 05, 2006 15:27 CDT
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This series is adorable! I love how you make Relena a cute character ^_^ She's so squeezable! And the way you make them real characters... it's brilliant, Are you going to continue the series and keep giving us a strong, likable, grown-up Relena? (As fun as Relena-bashing fics are, I like your idea of a grown-up, competent human being Relena better...)
| Reviewed By: shadowweaver On: March 19, 2005 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~laughs~ This was quite amusing, and I enjoyed reading this immensely. There were a few grammatical errors and some misspellings, but beyond that, it was a very enjoyable piece to read. By the way, the word for 'miss' is spelled 'Fraulein' not 'Frauline'. ^_^ Just thought I'd give you that tidbit of information for future use.
| Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 02:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GLOMP!!!!! Wonderful chapter. And the characterisation of german behaviour is only slightly exagerated, hehehehe, but very typical. If anyone feels insulted by that, I take the blame. After all, I gave you the information about germany. Okay, the dialect thing is more like slang and is mostly spoken only among locals. Maybe I exagerated that bit of information, sorry. Too make Germany the safest land in the world with the lowest crime rate, how flattering. So now some words to my most favourite parts: Relena snot is disgusting, mmmuuhahhahaa, how do you come up with those lines? I like that Heero is starting to accept the changed aka real Relena and not the idealistic picture of the Peace-Princes/Queen he has in his head. Well, there is a reason why the rope-eater is named rope-eater and now Heero knows why. Because it is eating ropes. About the end, I couldn't think of any other way to end this story. The alternative would have been that they would travel back by train and smuggle Relena back into the castle, how boring. This way Relena and Heero had time for talking and bonding. And Relena got to use her camping equipment like she wanted to. Are you going to continue this? Though I have to admit that I can't think of another situation to put them in. Or was that a hint with Heero suggesting a trip to amerika???? hehehe looking forward to it.
| Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: March 17, 2005 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! It was long (not that I mind!). I loved it, and could you please, please, please write more of these? I love them! Yay! The ending was cute, but it seemed kind of sudden...oh, well. I loved it and can't wait for the next one!
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