"Only A Moment" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: emkhaein [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 06:14 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: The rewrite seems smooth... you put in Sano, right?
| Reviewed By: ArwenSol [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 12:51 CST Comment/Review: Ah! cute ^_^ I like the way this story is going and you seem to have a good grip on the language. Just wondering about Kenshin's little lapses into Yoda-speech, is that something you've incoporated yourself? It doesn't really seem reminescent of the manga or the anime and is a little jarring, but maybe you have a different translation. Please keep writing, I really want to see where this is headed!
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