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"Only A Moment" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: emkhaein [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 07, 2005 06:14 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The rewrite seems smooth... you put in Sano, right?
 Reviewed By: ArwenSol [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 24, 2005 12:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah! cute ^_^ I like the way this story is going and you seem to have a good grip on the language. Just wondering about Kenshin's little lapses into Yoda-speech, is that something you've incoporated yourself? It doesn't really seem reminescent of the manga or the anime and is a little jarring, but maybe you have a different translation. Please keep writing, I really want to see where this is headed!

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