Reviewed By: JadeWriter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story. Short and sweet. It was just the right length for a story like this. Some lemons are too long while others end after a paragraph, so I'm pleased with the length of this story. I liked the fact that it wasn't too graphic (sometimes those graphic scenes can get tiring), nor was it too mushy, which is a relief. The ending was okay, but from my reading it seemed like it was rushed a bit. Other than that, nice job with the first lemon.
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