[FanFics] Support This Site
[ New Forum ] [ Register ] [ Login ]
« Email Author » « Author's Homepage » « Other Works By This Author » « Add Author to Favorites »
« Write Review » « Read (5) Reviews » « Add Story to Favorites » « Alert Webmaster »

"Apocalypse" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ]
 Reviewed By: Laural Rose [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 19, 2005 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was rather ambitious for a one shot. Also, writing from Yukina's point of view was masterful. Here and there your grammar was a little unclear, but it didn't impede the story. Very good read.
 Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh again  On: March 18, 2005 19:38 CST
Comment/Review:
BTW, toasterwoman's right. There were several mistakes.
 Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh O_O  On: March 18, 2005 19:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Think happy thoughts... think happy thoughts... think happy thoughts... Don't be offended, but I think you need help.
 Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 18, 2005 16:38 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow...i really liked how hiei told yukina the truth (the whole sibling thingy). overall it was good, but i think i noticed a few grammar or spelling mistakes or something (or maybe that's just me and my weirdness) but you might wanna check just in case.
 Reviewed By: hiei_luver09 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 18, 2005 15:38 CST
Comment/Review:
why did it have to be a one shot. boo hoo *CRYS* well i thought it was good. well actuqlly really goos. you had me crying over this i believed it so much.

« Email Author » « Author's Homepage » « Other Works By This Author » « Add Author to Favorites »
« Write Review » « Read (5) Reviews » « Add Story to Favorites » « Alert Webmaster »

Write Review/Comment
Name/Nick:
required
Title:
optional
Rating:
optional
Style of Writing:  
Spelling & Grammar:  
Originality/Creativity:  
Enjoyment Factor: Is this a fun to read or a boring fanfic?
Overall Rating: Not necessarily based on the other ratings.
Review/Comment:
required
If you've rated the fanfic, please try to explain your reasoning behind your rating
(You may enter up to 4000 characters.)

characters left
You may use the following HTML tags inside your comment:
<b>Bold</b>
<i>Italics</i>
<u>Underline</u>
<font size="3">Font Size</font>
<font color="green">Font Color</font>
Spam Filter:
required
Please enter the letters written below:

.########..##.........#######...##.....##.
.##........##........##.....##..##.....##.
.##........##........##.....##..##.....##.
.######....##........##.....##..##.....##.
.##........##........##..##.##...##...##..
.##........##........##....##.....##.##...
.##........########...#####.##.....###....