"Apocalypse" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Laural Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 15:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This was rather ambitious for a one shot. Also, writing from Yukina's point of view was masterful. Here and there your grammar was a little unclear, but it didn't impede the story. Very good read.
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh again On: March 18, 2005 19:38 CST Comment/Review: BTW, toasterwoman's right. There were several mistakes.
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh O_O On: March 18, 2005 19:37 CST Comment/Review: Think happy thoughts... think happy thoughts... think happy thoughts... Don't be offended, but I think you need help.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 16:38 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow...i really liked how hiei told yukina the truth (the whole sibling thingy). overall it was good, but i think i noticed a few grammar or spelling mistakes or something (or maybe that's just me and my weirdness) but you might wanna check just in case.
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Reviewed By: hiei_luver09 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 15:38 CST Comment/Review: why did it have to be a one shot. boo hoo *CRYS* well i thought it was good. well actuqlly really goos. you had me crying over this i believed it so much.
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