| "Dragonball Infinity" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: chapter 20/21
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAAY! this is the way to wake up! as soon as i woke up, turn on my laptop and logged.. i saw that you updated... i woke up completely then and started dancing litterally, haha ~ not many fics do that... also, the scary thing is that i was thinking about this fic before i fell asleep... weird in it @_@; ~ i really enjoyed these to chapter ~ i got annoyed when those OI Raditz' stop vegeta from going... then OI Nappa's... and OI Brolly's... heh *scratches head* ~ and when they all turned super saiyan i started screamimg at the laptop (actually more shouting then screaming... i can't scream ^_^;;) ~ i would tell you the other bits i got crazy over, but i don't think i have the space nor the time (cause college is starting soon)and i don't think you'd want to read one long-ass review either so, i just hope you do update soon and leave it at that ^-^
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Title: chapter 18/19
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a quick update, i guess my warning work huh? XD ~ great chapter, as usual! ~ i like the chats between gokuu and the nurse, that was... interesting O_o ~ and gokuu and still pregnant? O_O... cool!! ~ i hope gokuu gets to see vegeta again *looks hopeful* and i also hope gokuu doesn't loss the baby... or die. ~ can't wait for the next update! ^-^
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Title: chapter 1-17
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is fantastic!!~ i can't get enough of this story ^0^ ~ this is just great. ~ you gotta update soon, pretty please?? ~ i'll probably explode if u leave it too long, and as much as that sounds like fun, it really isn't when your the one doing the exploding, heh ^_^;; ~ hope ta R&R ya later! ^-^
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Reviewed By: WEEEE On: August 15, 2005 22:28 CDT
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Um ....liked the chapter except the end ...you leave it as she is knocked out? ...there could be better ways to end it in my honest opinion. Kind of weird that you have 2 problems actually its 3 ...vegeta has to fight cooler ..maybe brolly if he reacts to kakarotto and has to maybe protect her also ..shit vegetas got his work cut out for him.
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Reviewed By: lose some gain some On: August 11, 2005 16:13 CDT
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Hey you Im enjoying this fic...damn shame not many are reviewing this story.
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Reviewed By: malimillions [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 21:48 CDT
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Don't sweat it -- I like this 'fic a lot! It doesn't mean anything bad if I review on this one, does it? : (
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Reviewed By: malimillions [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah --- Damn. *Reads the chapter again* .... DAMN!
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Reviewed By: Mermaid Ninja On: June 26, 2005 18:49 CDT
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More please!!
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