| "Twisted Fates" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I can see all the little bits and pieces and hints of things that you're laying down here... and I really hope you get a chance to continue this one day. The concept is great and I love the way you're writing Bardock. I also liked the way Goku has taken to provoking Vegeta, just to see how he'll react. That's the sort of dangerous game any good Saiyan would like to play. :D
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Reviewed By: chidogs [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your take on these characters!!!! My God, the dialogue is perfect and so right. The situation is priceless, and all of the reactions are so true I can visualize it. The only problem is.....I want MORE! Please. *begs* And, yeah, Vegeta's suggestion at the end of chapt 2 is priceless and so *Vegeta*.
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Title: achillona
Reviewed By: anz On: July 25, 2005 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have no idea as to just how talented you really are. For the most part, the emotion your writing evokes is without equal. I sincerely hope you continue this fic. I love all of your work. It's AWESOME! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. This is a wonderful story and I look foward to future chapters. Your writing's are quite an adventure.
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Reviewed By: elenek (it said I was logged in) On: March 24, 2005 07:49 CST
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I love your writing. It's so very poignant. I would be careful with Goten and Trunks though. You made them both 14 but they seemed to still act like they were eight. Then again that was just a snippet. Thank You for writing -El-
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 05:54 CST
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!!!!! I could just pick out the perfect sentences one after another. Gems on velvet. And your unmistakable voice, the poignant humor. This story is so great, thank you from the bottom of my Xero-Sky groupie heart. Nothing like a good Dbz fic in the a.m! *sighs contently*
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 03:48 CST
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O.o ... ... o.O The female OC isn't a beautiful English woman, who uses her stunning beauty and phenomenal strength to capture Bardock's heart, when she's giving one of her astoundingly accomplished musical recitals one evening? I'm shocked, stunned and disappointed... and not a little hurt... "In his experience, most aliens reeked like something dead or something pissed on, but he had to admit that most aliens he'd met had died soon afterwards." I know it's disturbing, but it's lines like that that make me love him even more... O_O So many wonderful moments in this chapter, I don't know where to begin, so I'll just go and pout in a corner at the lack of English women... *Pokes head around corner* - Oh, I forgot to say thank you for such a lovely, quick update, and how much I'm enjoying this... :D
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 00:33 CST
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Yanno, I think Bardock's having one of those Calgon days. At least when he was in Hell, he knew where he stood. Things that should be monumental appear to be everyday occurances to his new acquaintances. Not dead? No big deal. Sociable Vegiita? He's not such a bad guy once you get to know him. Ascended? Hasn't everyone? Ki? Wait - let me get my scouter... Loved Bardock's little introduction to the teenagers, and LOL at Vegiita's attempt at getting Bardock and Goku to talk. Another wonderful fic!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 08:11 CST
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I'm hooked. I love HELL stories. And the writing is beautiful. Thanks for this. You've got me blinking back tears.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 05:36 CST
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Ohhhhh - do you have any idea how good it is to see you back? Do you have any idea how good it is to see you back with a chapter that centred around Bardock? This was a darned good chapter, I look forward to mre. (It's earlyish here - just woken up, and haven't had the energy to get coffee - proper reviews on subsequent chapters)
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