Reviewed By: amythestmage [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hopefully this makes some sense... I am curious as to how this continues, though it seems almost a one-shot as-is. I particularly like the concluding interplay between the concepts of undead and living, as it seems either a thought-provoking ending or powerful base for futher information/chapters. I will admit that the Japanese references are slightly distracting, but it is an author's discretion to incorporate other languages (I myself often rely on Latin), and the references do not seem overused. I'm not sure that this is particularly helpful or encouraging, but it is simply my opinion. More would be nice, though it is good as it is. -amythestmage
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