| "The Untold Terror Of The Betas Three" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Title: there are stories in the span of mortal life that touch all deeply and profoundly...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...then, there's THIS one. OHMYGAWD, Sue! It's lie reading yout Totosai X 1000 ( and I laughed myself Fuschia off THAT one)! **cyber glomps and care packages to all you faithful (and frantic...LOL!) betas. I have learned from this tale of yours how to properly care for my beta and show my utmost appreciation! SUGAR-LADEN SNACKS! Thankies, Sue! ROFL!
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Title: oh kami-sama
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 00:32 CDT
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Sue, you have truely lost your marblez. Locking your poor betas in the cellar/basement? Working them to the bone? Poor, poor, poor betas. *Makes mental note to send betas some real food.* I would shudder in fear, if you ever got a whip.
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Title: >.
Reviewed By: InuYasha_Hentai_Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG LMAO!!!!! I LOVE YOU WORK!!!! That is so awesome, I laughed so hard. ...Do you really keep your betas locked in a cellar? .> ::waves her hands infront of her face.:: I won't tell! I swear!! Lmao!! J/k anyway that was so funny, I love your Fanfics, I love your writing period! Keep writing, I love to read!!!!! Maybe I should steal you and lock you in my cellar, and make you write for me! ::ponders that thought:: Keep writing!!! ::bows to your betas:: I will pray for their souls. XD ::hug::~Sagokiyo
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 15:16 CDT
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.......*pulls out little button and pushes it revealing .50 cal chain guns and 200mm cannons aiming at Suric* Stay away from me...... *grabs sword and gun* I mean it.... STAY AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashachic612 On: September 25, 2005 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! wow these chapter were hiarious! i love them thou! they are so good! cant wait to read more, til next time! ^_^
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Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your betas must love you (and fear you). This is halarious!
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 22:04 CDT
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Oh my... That was absolutely hysterical. It's wonderful that you and your betas are close enough that you would write a story for (and about) them. It's also great how you can so easily describe yourself as evil and maniacal. This is definitely one of my new favorites. My regards to the betas.
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Title: .........................
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 12:39 CDT
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Wow...that was...disturbing. I think that would be the nicest way of saying that, lol...Jeez, for such an "interesting" story, this one had me laughing almost all throughout it! Hmm...no more room for betas, huh? Well...after reading that, can't say if thats a good or bad thing. Anyways, hilarious little short! Kudos to your betas, may they forever work in your basement, lol! (they do an awesome job!)
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 00:30 CDT
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LMAO!!! Those were funny. Your poor betas...I give them my condolences.
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 15:54 CDT
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OH BALLZ!!!! LOL every once in a while I ahve to go back and reread this and LMAO it;s so funny... The best part is I got to say ballz. Joo crack me up I ish glad joo are meh friend!
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 18:35 CDT
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A shirtless Cain, sounds nice! lol! wow..u've gone insane havent you..in a good way ofcourse! (wait is there a good way to be insane..?
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Reviewed By: ll kocoum ll [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 18:41 CDT
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LoL, that was effing funny. I'm kinda jealous now. I'd want to be locked up in a cellar with a computer and a sketch pad. :]
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Reviewed By: Kesstral (notsignedin) On: May 14, 2005 21:22 CDT
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mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm shirtless cain eh? I like this glimpse into the future... and of course, an obligatory LMAO(!!!!)
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Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 15:53 CDT
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Highly amusing! I almost feel sorry for your Betas. Almost. After all they did ask for it ^_^ But It had me giggling, especially at the Mommy of Yore bit. Yay for amusement and incoherent babbling.
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Title: i have found the hell yet it could be a heaven
Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 15:05 CDT
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*i'm wide eyed as i watch the caged ones work...i have snuck into their hell, where SHE holds them*(i am a small furry dragon...or perhaps a cat with wings, it's unknown as of yet)*i slip around the cages to the urns and i sniff at them gently*(no one knows i'm here, i am too silent and small, and right now my fur is dark like shadows)*i wonder in my silence if perhaps i am not already caught like these, or if i want to be..i move back to the cages*(i was once feral but you have tamed me with your stories)*i need to see the picture that i heard the commotion about, but i can't see it*(i'm too small, and if i try to jump to see it, i would be found)*so i wait, till it's come out for all to see...and i sit in silence watching the betas, and the artist as they work and talk among themselves and i may even wish to be part of it somehow*(as a pet to HER or a pet for the caged ones to play with when they're tired, i wouldn't know)*i think about the choices and wonder what i truly want, and i wonder if she'll ever catch me as i watch the betas, and the artist in silence forevermore*
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