| "Fateful Abyss" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Tchknght On: April 23, 2005 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was wonderful. it captures you in the full metal alchemist storyline but i think it ended to short. i hope you write more aboutthis storyline and this storyline. you use excellent words to describe everything to how the feel to the area. plz write more.
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Reviewed By: Fox Writer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good!
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Title: Holy crud.
Reviewed By: Yami no Renkinjutsushi On: April 17, 2005 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not generally a fan of non-canon pairings, but this WORKS! And, let's face it, Ed and Riza look cute together. A great fanfiction...PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: sweetums On: April 17, 2005 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was seriously wonderful.....I loved every word. The way you expressed emotions, really caught me. I've read romance like this, but the feelings wern't played out very well. But this was beyond wonderful. Great work. Great work.
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Title: Fateful Abyss
Reviewed By: Water_Goddess On: March 24, 2005 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh very good I stopped updating on Mediaminer because I didn't get any review but don't give up on them very good but don't forget to double check your work.
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