Reviewed By: cat 55 On: July 01, 2005 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok... this wasn't a bad fic... really it was nice... but you've got to slow down a bit! I mean you rushed things so much my head is still spinning... the idea was nice and the struggle against Soul Edge very dramatic, I liked it... but then again like I said, Link just came out of no where like the other characters... So, next time try to cook your stories a little longer... the impression I had is that everything was just left raw... I'm sorry, I know it's heard when people criticize you writting, but like I said, the idea was good... you just have to let it bloom...
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