| "Family Ties" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Prinsess_serenity59 (nsi) On: April 27, 2005 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story and I cannot wait till you finish it (but don't rush yourself ^^) I love it! Ran-Chan
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Reviewed By: LavenderRose(nsi) On: April 26, 2005 22:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Way cool! Is Kimiko going to realize the significance of her savior? More to the point, will the old miko remember where she's seen Miroku before? The youkai went down almost TOO quickly, but if this fic is just a little block-breaker, I can completely understand. I still like it, though! Hope "All of Me" doesn't give you too many fits anymore--I really enjoyed that one, what you had anyway ;) Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: LavenderRose (nsi) On: April 21, 2005 09:36 CDT
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Good explanatory chapter...I like the way you managed to give some background to what's going on without becoming too heavy-handed with the flashbacky stuff. Do you think Miroku's secret will be exposed? Hmmmm, guess I'll just have to wait and see. As far as your food for thought---BAD BOSS!
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Title: Hello!
Reviewed By: kaginu On: April 15, 2005 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I know I said my name was kaginu, but I'm really rachainu and I don't have the time to log in right now and I can't use my real name unless I do. But I think your story is great! Please update again soon. It's rare that I find an author who has such a way with writing words. Keep it up, please!
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Reviewed By: black girl 06 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great so far! keep going!
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Reviewed By: LavenderRose(nsi) On: March 27, 2005 17:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Clever story idea. I'm enjoying Miroku's dilemma very much. On another note, what ever happened to "All of Me?" That was another story I ws really enjoying. I guess what I'm saying is I like your work immensely--plese don't stop! I also like your Food For Thought!
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Reviewed By: Prinsess_serenity59 (nsi) On: March 27, 2005 00:17 CST
Comment/Review:
really good chappie keep it up and dont let anyone get you down Ran-Chan
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Reviewed By: Mr. Mr. Mr. Mra. On: March 22, 2005 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep going, even if no one reviews *scowls* i'll be here reading it! Do not become disheartened! Update update update!
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Reviewed By: Prinsess_serenity59 (nsi) On: March 21, 2005 16:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Looks good so fqar keep it up dremember stay at your oown path! ^^ Squishy^^;;
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