Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 21:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Just finished reviewing for Must Be Dreaming! Great poem. You should think about writing more of them. I see you're very attached to the YugixYami pairing. It's so cute, isn't it? And, of course, as all dark writers would think, it's so easy to use for a depressing fic. Being the english freak I am, I just have to comment on the wrong use of homophones at a few points. Don't worry; we all make mistakes. Aside from that, the poem was flawless, very deep, and moving. Happy writings! I'll read your last one either later tonight or tomorrow. ~Rikoh-chan~ P.S. Write more! You're really good at it. But I'm not saying write for the hell of it without inspiration 'cause then that wouldn't turn out so good. ^^;;;
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