| "Ranma and the Outers" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: ordieth117 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too much deus ex machina. Not enough life. I loved the precepts. But then everything started going all perfect and revengy and no one was living. Where's the emotion? Where's the drive?
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Reviewed By: ovidkie On: November 17, 2006 10:37 CST
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nice I just found this story and its good I want to read more of it also what going to happen when ranma's mother finds out what Ranma's been doing
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Reviewed By: dogbertcarroll [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent work. You've complicated things nicely.
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Title: nicely done
Reviewed By: iatnehfognik [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
very nice...ho-iatneh dont get it why does most of the Ranma Sailor x-overs are so good...no matter its a hentai horde story or just a plain old story that involve no sex at all...this is a nice blend of both those factors...deep feelings haaa...and getting it ONNN! YAW-SA! anyways ho-iatneh is getting off topic...although there are quite a few things that can be improved. It seems a little bit ho-iatneh dont know kinda blend. add a little bit action not just betwn the sheets.
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: Mike W On: August 28, 2005 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job not teh most original but very fun to read and good charater usage. I like how you just ignore the whole how did they get together and move on. If you can work it in it would be great but unesseary. Keep up the good work
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Title: ranma and the outers
Reviewed By: ghosts On: August 01, 2005 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is a good story to read and is there going to a story about how ranma ended up in juuban with the two women in bed. what did akane or nibiki say or do to make him leave for good this time?
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Athenaise On: May 06, 2005 07:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it. Only hope that Ranma will get the money out of Nabiki with help from the outers and I am curios what for a Sailor Ranma/Ranko will be. I mean will he get somehting like a transformation as the tree lights or whatever there name was... his own planet, the sun, some moon, the earth or neptuns power for a while and naturally his own. please continue soon. I am really liked it a lot. Only the chapter could be longer.
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Reviewed By: archphoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Ok, that was a nice variation of the base-fic. Quite WAFF'y as well, and that's a plus in by book. Hope to read the continuation soon ^_^.
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Reviewed By: Schwarz On: March 21, 2005 17:51 CST
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Really good fic. It is indeed quite different from All My Outers. I hope you update soon to see how the Inners take the news, particularlly Chibi-Usa, and the NWC. keep up the good work.
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