| "Desinty Betroved" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: alphaskiier On: April 06, 2005 20:34 CDT
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Again another great chapter. I can't wait fot the next one. Ohhh! Interesting plot twist, Miko is pregnant. What's going happen next?
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Reviewed By: alphaskiier On: April 06, 2005 20:28 CDT
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Another chapter done. Very good, at times I am very tired of the cliche Subaru/Seishirou fics. So your story is a breath of fresh air. Please, by all means continue. I very much enjoy your story and its characters.
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Reviewed By: alphaskiier On: April 02, 2005 21:08 CST
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Another excellent chapter. As far as I can see all the main characters have now been introduced. So Subaru and Miko are now married. Seishirou is Hokuto's boyfriend in order to get closer to Subaru. What about Kakyou? Are most of the events in the Tokyo Babylon storyline going to happend here? In anycase don't stop writing and write more as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: alphaskiier On: March 24, 2005 21:21 CST
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Very interesting!!! I really like Miko. Will Seishirou play some sort of romantic rival to her. Speaking of Seishirou, I can't wait to see him. Write more ASAP.
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