| "Catechism" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: !
Reviewed By: Sandileina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 12:23 CDT
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I am extremely impressed. This is one of the most thought-provoking things I have ever read in my life. I found it fascinating to read someone else's view on the topics covered in this story, so thankyou a hundred million times for that. I think this is best left without a sequel; that would most likely ruin the charm of this fic. That's just my opinion though; if you want to write a sequel, don't let me stop you! I'll read it and probably enjoy it too, so... *Shrugs* ~Sandy~
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Reviewed By: Clau_ On: July 20, 2005 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god... that is sooo sweet! So cute! Awww.... how tempting to leave it like that and I just know that writing a sequel would spoil all this cuteness... but how tempting....ne? Just to know how Heero's parents would react if they knew, how Duo's life will turn out to be if the priest knew... maybe I should just imagine all this and still enjoy how cute this storie ends eh? Great fic ^^
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 19:16 CDT
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deep... I like it... Those are a lot of my own thoughts on the religion... which is why i don't got to mass anymore
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Reviewed By: Harmonie Des Anges [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 22:42 CDT
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GOD I LOVE YOU!!!!!! I know you read it to me, and that was wonderful, but just reading it again made me love it even more. I was in stitches when they were decribing eachother....Autumn and late winter or early spring or whatever...together chilly and slightly breezy....and partly cloudy...hee hee hee. Oh and you have, without a doubt, one of the most AWESOME love confessionals in the world in this story. Much love.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 08:07 CST
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That was quite a vivid fic! I loved the way you wrote Heero and Duo. Keep up the good work!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: vox dei On: March 22, 2005 22:09 CST
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This was great. Using a few brush strokes you were able to capture so much- both visually and character-wise. The ending was just perfect as well. Stumbling onto a gem like this is the best thing about occasionally checking out a new author... aquononascendet AT yahoo.com
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: hells-angel8 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a really awesome job for writing about such a touchy subject. You had a good point about people who go to church and how they view things, mostly the reason people act the way they do is out of fear. Both Duo and Heero have such deep insight about religion and themselves that they seem older than they actually are. You did an awesome job and it is definitely one of my favorites. Huggles!
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Reviewed By: Patience On: March 22, 2005 08:21 CST
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Wonderfully written story, but so very cynical. I don't think I've ever known any teenagers that steeped in religion to come up with the answers Duo came up with. Religion, of course, is a touchy subject to write about. Your story hints that all people of faith are fools for believing as they do, at least according to Duo The Wise. You left out only one important fact in his reasoning; religion is faith based. The people he scoffed at have deep faith, (and frankly, most people don't go to church and pay a tithe out of fear or fire insurance). And though most religions look at homosexuality as a sin, a true Christian will still love those engaging in it nor will they cause any harm to anyone living that lifestyle. Interesting story.
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