| "Did ya miss me?" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 01:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was good. Not the best lemon I have ever read. At first I thought the diologe was really corny but when I realized she was daydreaming it made it better. Good job though!
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Title: Did Ya Miss Me?
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 17:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
really really really good. that was HOT! lol n e ways i hope you write more and yeah.. keep up the good work! (:
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Title: Intriguing
Reviewed By: xenus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a lemon, so your friend was smart to tell you to give it an NC-17 rating. Though, it was good, I thoroughly enjoyed it...
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