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| "Final Fantasy 7: Darkness Falls" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: cloudstrife1389 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 07:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the most amazing fanfic i have ever read, great style of writing and great storyline. i started about a week or so ago and jus fininshed it a few days ago. i told my friend,Kamui2304, about it and now hes reading it.
| Title: GREAT Fic
Reviewed By: Kamui2304 On: June 24, 2004 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great Fanfic my friend told me about it today 6/24/04 and so far i read 4 chapters and it is GREAT nice style of writeing and great battle sceans overall i think its a 10 out of 10 very great job Gem!! =)please make more i wanna read MORE!!
| Title: Not bad!
Reviewed By: Amy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 08:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the prologue and I didn't see anything wrong with this story. It has an interesting plot and I love Red Thirteen! He's my favorite character in the game and you portray him so very wise and humble, especially at his age. Not bad at all, I'm surprised no one gave you a review and I'm shock that you got poor review instead. This should brighten your day! I'm impressed by your style of writing, I don't think you should have to explain everything out for people! They should be able to use their imagination and figure it out for themselves. That's why Phy, it's usually called common sense!
| Reviewed By: Phy On: November 12, 2001 14:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Gemini, One cliche of advice: "Less telling, more showing"
Instead of saying "Red began to commune with the planet" show the audience what he's really doing..."Red's face grew calm, his eyes searched far within as etc"
Just use pictures, smells, touch, taste, you get the point.
And as Bill Clinton would say "It's the PUNTO, Stupid!" |
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