| "Two Can Play" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Liei On: July 12, 2004 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The originality was amazing. I loved the entire fic. It had me mesmerized to the very end. The bet was great. I'm so relieved though that Duo didn't have to cut his hair. I thought I'd cry. The lemon was excellent. Keep it up. I loved the pairings.
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Reviewed By: Anona On: October 08, 2003 21:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sigh* So good; another please? Hee. I love how you portrayed the characters--very true to the manga and anime. Me love Wufei. :D
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 19:18 CDT
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This was sooooooooooooo goooooood! I never read Hiiro/Relen... but this one just caught my eye.... I swear I have never laughed so hard in my life! That was brilliance andthe fact that there was a sprinkle of 3x4 in there made it even better for me! Keep it up you're a good writer if you can get R_Winner to stray from her usual yaoi fiction fetish!
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Reviewed By: Crittle On: August 24, 2003 00:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent story, thanks for writing it! |
Reviewed By: Janime On: July 07, 2003 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank God! I was so upset when FF.net removed teh NC17 fics and this is one of my favorites. I'm so happy! |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2003 22:05 CDT
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>^.^< Awwwww... that was so sweet! Please write a sequel? I really loved this story and compliment you on your style of writing, this story is perfectly in sync with what i picture life for the pilots being after a couple of years of normal life to break down their barriers. Bwahahahahaha! To my faves list now! Thanks for a story well done! Ja ne! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Airen On: April 11, 2003 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an excellent fic! Well-written, well-plotted, great characterization, funny and sweet with a dash of lemony goodness to even things out. Plus it left me with a goofy smile on my face. What more could a reader ask for?
I congratulate you on a job well done! ^___^ |
Reviewed By: Arwen Moonstar On: December 30, 2002 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first fic that has made me laugh in a while! Congrats on doing such a good job! |
Reviewed By: Val On: October 29, 2002 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Funny and sweet with a bit of lemonish scent... What more can we ask for?
I really appreciated the way the different persons we have come to learn from the tv series still interacts with each other, years later, quite realistic I'd say even if everybody doesn't agree with me.
I really hope you're gonna write an other one! |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you did a really great in the making of this story, and I hope that there will be a sequel to this story too. |
Reviewed By: char On: April 01, 2002 07:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it is kind'a funny but the writer should try to develop a comedy fic using the characters' real personalities.This may be kind'a biased by I don't think Heero would easily agree to tut-tut with Relena, even if he didn't mean to.Also, I don't think Relena would straightforwardly invite Heero to do it. But all in all, as I've said, it's funny, so the fic did accomplish its mission(is it obvious that I'm a Heero fan?). |
Reviewed By: Bj On: January 26, 2002 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is great. Hot sex is great ke writeing. |
Reviewed By: Karla On: November 17, 2001 05:22 CST
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This was good! I admit, I'm not a Gundam Wing fan, But I might just become one, simply becuase of this excellent story! Give us more! |
Reviewed By: znat On: November 18, 2001 06:14 CST
Comment/Review:
that was cool!
Funny and sappy..
but with a lemonish tang...
U gotta write another one!!pplllleasseee!! |
