"Abandoned Truth" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Kai Maiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 21:04 CDT Comment/Review: well.......that was depresing.
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Title: Good writing Style Reviewed By: JinReincarnation [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 06:56 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: You use a great writing style. The second chapter contains a very good ending. It was original because of the fact that everyone puts them together.
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Title: WritE MOre ChaPS Reviewed By: Sakuragi On: May 02, 2005 02:17 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: It was great though but i was kinda ho;in that there will be more of Amon saying how he liked Robin :< The originality was great though. Hope you'll continue writing more chaps ya...
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