| "Awakening Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Secret Asian Man On: December 13, 2001 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm impressed with the character development and interactions. It is well done.
There are some points in the story that seems abrupt and sort of vaugue. Try ironing it out and allow for a smoother transition.
Overall, it's an excellent read. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: King_Mortonia On: November 26, 2001 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
An interesting fic. Inserting your own character who is super strong is overdone and kind of boring, but you managed to pull it off nicely. A bit more detail during some of the battle scenes would have been nice and try to stay away from saying practically the same thing for every attack. But overall it's a very nice story. |
