| "Slowly Sinking And No One To Save Me" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Title: Good Job!
Reviewed By: Yugis-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your not crazy, and your poem about the Jar was you saying something depressing, just in a different way.And I like your story! Its VERY good. And I love your poems! Keep up the good work! :)
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Reviewed By: hikari_enzeru On: April 08, 2005 14:52 CDT
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OMG! wow that was just sad! i haven't read a story that sad in a long time! this is great, i love it. now what's going to happen to ryo? is he going to find happyness in the world or will he try to escape everthing? there's only one way for us reader's to find out, UPDATE! i know you have a lot more great ideas in that head of yours, hurry with the next chapter and keep up the good work.^_^
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Reviewed By: paniwi (at school) On: April 08, 2005 04:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't wait for you to update again
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Reviewed By: Kat1132 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was another good chapter. I usually review you on fanfiction, but what ever. I think that Malik and now Bakura feel guilty as heck. I can't wait to see how this story will progress. Oh and I liked the poem.
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Title: good!
Reviewed By: Yugis-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your storys great! Poor Ryou. How depressing. I really love your story! I would be happy to give you some ideas. Just tell me. Talk to ya later. bye!
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Reviewed By: Yuki Eiri On: April 04, 2005 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe! this is good^.^ poor Ryou :: prods :: come on! update soon! you know you want to ! :: hugs :: Yuki xx
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Title: nice...
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 09:07 CST
Comment/Review:
hehehe, don't listen to tjay too much...if it was up to her other pairings involving the Bakura's would probably have been banned off of mm.org by now (sorry tjay, I don't mean it bad, I love those 2 too, you know that!!!) But I don't know what idiot would try and flame you, I simply love the poems, and also the way Ryou thinks and all, a little distant and "floating" if you catch my drift. Keep it up, I like this
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Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 09:51 CST
Comment/Review:
not bad... more BxR is need... :D
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