| "Hurry up, goggle-head!" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Rascelmon On: November 29, 2002 11:44 CST
Comment/Review:
This is great. Rika lives two lives. One cold hearted and uncaring, but in the darkness of the night, she oh-so sweet to her Takato. |
Reviewed By: strider On: February 02, 2002 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very creative ideas. You should write another story very soon.
(something i should do too) |
Reviewed By: krimsonkiller On: November 13, 2001 18:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Bravo *Applauds* that was a good story.
My $0.02:could you possably tell me what happened so I can put 2 and 2 together for how thaey got in the same bed. |
Reviewed By: A-man On: November 13, 2001 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
WELL DONE AND GOOD CHOICE OF WORDS FOR EVERYTHING. |
