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Title: Dessperation
Reviewed By: Celeste Bellow On: July 20, 2005 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssss tell us when the new chapter comes out!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm for sure can't take this longing of love those charcters any longer. Reading other Storys of them making me long for them even more. I relly won't Yami more, and morE, and MORE!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Yugi love
Reviewed By: Celeste Bellow On: July 20, 2005 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleases come out with the next chapter soon. All the other chapters wre so convening of the love, pain, and pasion that was in the chapthers. So please, please, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees come out the next chapther soon.
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Reviewed By: Hikari Girl On: June 10, 2005 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooo so sweet! Please write the next chapter soon! Dont keep us in suspence! I just can't get over how sweet Yami&Yugi are *drool* ^_^ P.S. sorry about the revew that I gave erlyer.(wrong story ) Enyway this story is just as awsom...and between u fellow Highschool love fans and me this is better (SCORE!) dont tell enyone I said that (dont want to get in trouble) Well ill be weighting, and cheking up on everything by!~_^
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Reviewed By: Hikari Girl On: June 09, 2005 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tis was incredible! The chapters keep getting beter & beter. It even has my favorit manga series, Gravitation (Gravitation is awsom. U go author!) ~_^ is has an incredible story line to it, so it is easy to folow it. I have read a lot of fick's and a lot of them are hard to folow. the evan make spelling earors like saying she insted of he. Enyway, I hafta read a lot of ficks on the site my friend & I run, so im relived to finaly read a great story that u can understand. My advice...READ IT. It's awsom!!! And on personal levels... I am an artest (seariousley I put my work on my site and has had it put in meusiums) and the way the author describes Yugi's pickure's was as if u could acualy see it. I seareusley sugest reading this.^_^
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Title: Good....
Reviewed By: KitKit (not logged in) On: May 25, 2005 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello this is KitKit I love your story so much! But only one thing though.... It's kind of hard to read all what they are doing sometimes, just space it out better cuz' I want to read what happens next!! ^__^ ya heard me U got me hooked
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Reviewed By: YukiEiri On: May 25, 2005 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohmigod! you soooooo have to update soon!, I love your style of writing!
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Reviewed By: forever broken (not logged in) On: May 19, 2005 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahw.. poor yugi, first almost being raped and now yami wasn't exactly nice to him! evil yami *pulls yami out of screen* *in the distance we hear yami screaming* so.. that was that! now go joey for beating some sence in yami's mind! and I hope yugi and yami make up (what most likely will happen) (I hope) and I really love the story so far!!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job!! Update soon Please.
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Reviewed By: eve forever broken On: May 16, 2005 16:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
ahw this is so cute! I like the way you kinda put yami and yugi together again! and I don't like that bastard of a stephfather!! *hits stephfather* I can't wait untill you update again! it really is a great story! and I also like the way you made the past! a really good story!~I can't wait untill you update!!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! I want this to go on and on. Update soon!
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Title: SWEEETNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kuramalvr6 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW!!!!!!!!!! i love this story it's incredible how one little story can brighten up my entire day! thank you very much for this great story! by the way i meant to review several times but i've been busy with finals so you'll have to excuse me. anyway i can't wait until you write mor ei love you and this story...later!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 07:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this. It sounds just like high school with all the rumors and gossip. Slutty girls and all,
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Title: it said i wasn't logged in
Reviewed By: kuramalvr6/sydney On: April 07, 2005 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW another great chapter i LOVE it...you know what's funny my friends all make fun of me for liking Yaoi but if they read this it might change their minds! anyway i never really liked soccer (no offense if you take it) but i found out how intense winning is to players...well i'm sorry it took me forever to finally read your updates (i don't even know if you care or not) but i can't wait for the next one! until then (which i hope is soon!!!) later!
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Reviewed By: Princess Atina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story was really good. kinda hard to read with all the big paragraphs floating around. anyway, update soon! ^_^ i'll be checking this out when you update again. hopefully if i have the time. chaio! and check out my fic when you get a chance to see if you like it...
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Reviewed By: eve forever broken On: April 06, 2005 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic!! really! I love it!! please update really really really soon!!! I can't wait! you're a great writer!! bye *waves at screen* eve
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