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Title: And he started eating the pizza-shaped table...
Reviewed By: Fushi (Who is now a MM member) On: September 17, 2005 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XDDDDDDDDDDDD! This was an awesome read! Zolo (or Zoro) VS the USA alchohol laws... o.o; This chapter was great! :) So... is the next chapter going to be the last? :(
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Reviewed By: N20000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 22:50 CDT
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Interesting chapter. Can't wait for the finale. Heh, I wouldn't be surprised if it took you more than a week. Anyway, nice job adding the repetetive villains at such good times. Anyway, this is good stuff. Keep it up. I really think this should be a movie.
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Reviewed By: minako025 On: September 13, 2005 17:31 CDT
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i can't wait for the next chapter. i wonder if you'll keep to the Titans series and make the apprentice - you know who. Or if you'll have a new twist.
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Reviewed By: N20000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 16:17 CDT
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I LIVE AGAIN! This is a message from N20000 formerly known as N2000! This is one of the few chapters that made me laugh. Trust me, the original Luffy is WAY better than the dub Luffy. Anyway, maybe you should have a part where Speedy, those Spanish guys and Bubble Bee all attack Luffy before the others show up and stop them from doing so. That would be the L33T! Anyway, nice work.
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Title: *is rolling around on the floor laughing*
Reviewed By: Fushi On: September 03, 2005 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! The latest chapter was awesome! xD Luffy thought the whole city was a room in the tower?! xD The Luffy in this story is funnier than the dub Luffy...
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Reviewed By: minako25@netzero.net On: August 14, 2005 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am really enjoying reading this fic. I'm not a fan of crossovers in general, but this one is really good. Cant wait to find out what Luffy-san does in the ... modern world. although the one piece universe seems to have no timeline what so ever... so it couldn't be that strange
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Reviewed By: Fushi On: August 09, 2005 16:01 CDT
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Heh, yeah. ^^ It must go along in the family, 'cuz my 10 year old sister likes to read Chobits. oO;;;;;;; *is waiting for more chapters*
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Reviewed By: Neil [N2000] On: August 09, 2005 08:20 CDT
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I'm suspended again! Oh well. As for Fushi, if you buy a manga called Shonen Jump every month, you might get a clear picture of what's going on, even though they're on, like, issue 35 already. And besides, you're like me. I ignore rating all the time! I can get away with it because I'm 16! Whoo!!! Of course I ignored ratings when I was 10, so what are ya' gonna' do?
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Fushi On: August 06, 2005 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fanfic I've ever read! :D Unfortunately, I've only seen OP in the form of the 4KidsTV dub, so I don't understand *entirely* what's going on. (I mean, in the dub, they changed Sanji's cigarette into a lollipop. o.O) Anyways, keep writing! I love this fic! (Even though it's PG13, and I'm only 12.)
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Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 13:38 CDT
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By the way, you are such a good author that I just have to get your opinion. I own a fic called Summer Bash. You are such a good Author that I want YOU to be a character in it. Check it out and tell me if you wish to be a part of it in the form of a review and describe yourself. I need characters and you're worth it!
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Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 11:21 CDT
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This fic becomes more and more interesting all the time. Wow, Sanji really understands love. I've never seen this side of him, even though he's only been in Luffy's crew for, like, ten Canadian episodes thus far and only 1 Canadian issue of Shonen Jump.
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Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 09:46 CDT
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Hey, I, NLD2000, am back with a new name because my suspension doesn't seem to be expiring yet. By the way, this was a great chapter, though I kinda' wish I coulda' seen the fight, but if the Titans didn't know about Luffy or even so much as the existence of this dimension, then how could they know who Nami is? (P.S. Read my fics!)
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Title: I only hope InuFan05 reads this ifc!
Reviewed By: Neil {I AM one of the members, the one you suspended!} On: July 07, 2005 09:14 CDT
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Well, it's NLD2000, and just so you know, you can't check out those fanfics I brought up. My account has been temporarily suspended and it turns out I can't register since the site recognises my account. Anyway, um... nice job on your fic and I only posted this comment in hopes that my fans will see it and read it! If SailorDark reads this, then she'll be sad to know that Animeland Deathmatches has been deleted from the site and doesn't exist anymore!
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Reviewed By: NLD2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 23:43 CDT
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Hello, I am a big fan of yours! I have sent many a review, including that one that made you feel special. I would just like to tell you that I am a fellow auther, and would like to tell you bout Animeland Deathmatches and Luffy: the Thousand-Year Door, which are my two best fics, and are very hard to miss since I update them so much. Anywho, love your story, keep up the good work, and... well... do whatever the hell you want! Oh, shit! >.
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Title: Sweet.
Reviewed By: Double & Trouble On: June 14, 2005 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We think it rocks! Do you think you could have one of the Titans eat cursed fruit? And then it wears off when he or she returns to Jump city! You based this on the Japenese series, didn't you? Don't care if you did or didn't! It rocks!
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