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Title: Cursed Fruit
Reviewed By: Raging koala [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! Did you just make up Ivan's cursed fruit? What's going to happen to the other Titans? Write more!
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Title: Whoa!
Reviewed By: Curtis Wildcat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! Talk about slick! I wasn't expecting that to happen to Beast Boy. Nice job writing the chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one!
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Title: Wah!
Reviewed By: Fushi(MM) On: September 27, 2005 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have an iMac, so I might not have MW... *looks*
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Reviewed By: N200 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 09:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um... Fushi, you're supposed to use Microsoft Word. Well, there are 3 other choices. Hell, the site tells you. All you have to do is upload and edit fanfics and the things has a long list of rules. One of them is which writing file to use.
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Title: Yay!/Aah!
Reviewed By: Fushi(MM Member) On: September 24, 2005 11:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay!: Yay, the next chapter isn't gpoing to be the last! *waves around "Ultimate Cruise" flaga* Aah!: Aah! It won't let me upload my fanfics! O.O What writing program are you supposed to use?!
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Reviewed By: Pivitor [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 15:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I never planned to "review" my own fic, but I figured this deserved a response before my next chapter...the next chapter is NOT the last chapter. Sorry for any misunderstanding. What I said was the the next chapter was the "beginning of the final arc." A story arc is a continuing story line. I consider The Ultimate Cruise to be comprised of three "arcs"...chapters 1-8 is one arc, chapters 9-15 is the second, and the next chapter (16) until the end will be the final arc. I can't finish a fic of this magnitude in just one more chapter...what I meant is the final confrontations will have more chapters then the previous arcs, probably. It's still gonna be a WHILE before I'm done this. Anyway, thanks you guys, and I should have a new chapter up soon!
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Reviewed By: N200 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 10:46 CDT
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Oh, one more thing for Fushi. If you want people to find your fics, login and people can link to your section the next time you send a review.
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Reviewed By: N200 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 18:21 CDT
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Fushi: Read the fic. The next chapter is going to be the last. Spence said so himself in the intro. Anyway, just so ya' know, it happened again. This is my new name! Not very creative but at least it's slightly obvious that this is the same guy who submitted Anime Idol and Animation Survivor, not to mention Animeland Deathmatches (I've lost all evidence of its existence so I can't submit it ever again). Anyway, great job on this chapter, I hope the finale is equally good. Oh, and if anyone reading this had read Animeland Deathmatches before my first suspension (Which was about 8 months) I plan on returning it to the site.
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Title: And he started eating the pizza-shaped table...
Reviewed By: Fushi (Who is now a MM member) On: September 17, 2005 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XDDDDDDDDDDDD! This was an awesome read! Zolo (or Zoro) VS the USA alchohol laws... o.o; This chapter was great! :) So... is the next chapter going to be the last? :(
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Reviewed By: N20000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 22:50 CDT
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Interesting chapter. Can't wait for the finale. Heh, I wouldn't be surprised if it took you more than a week. Anyway, nice job adding the repetetive villains at such good times. Anyway, this is good stuff. Keep it up. I really think this should be a movie.
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Reviewed By: minako025 On: September 13, 2005 17:31 CDT
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i can't wait for the next chapter. i wonder if you'll keep to the Titans series and make the apprentice - you know who. Or if you'll have a new twist.
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Reviewed By: N20000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 16:17 CDT
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I LIVE AGAIN! This is a message from N20000 formerly known as N2000! This is one of the few chapters that made me laugh. Trust me, the original Luffy is WAY better than the dub Luffy. Anyway, maybe you should have a part where Speedy, those Spanish guys and Bubble Bee all attack Luffy before the others show up and stop them from doing so. That would be the L33T! Anyway, nice work.
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Title: *is rolling around on the floor laughing*
Reviewed By: Fushi On: September 03, 2005 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! The latest chapter was awesome! xD Luffy thought the whole city was a room in the tower?! xD The Luffy in this story is funnier than the dub Luffy...
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Reviewed By: minako25@netzero.net On: August 14, 2005 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am really enjoying reading this fic. I'm not a fan of crossovers in general, but this one is really good. Cant wait to find out what Luffy-san does in the ... modern world. although the one piece universe seems to have no timeline what so ever... so it couldn't be that strange
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Reviewed By: Fushi On: August 09, 2005 16:01 CDT
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Heh, yeah. ^^ It must go along in the family, 'cuz my 10 year old sister likes to read Chobits. oO;;;;;;; *is waiting for more chapters*
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