| "Grandmaster of Anything Goes" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Dak. On: July 02, 2002 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wanted this, so here my friend.
There's several Grammer errors in the title alone. Not to mention in the story as well. My friend, sit down and read through your story. All those errors makes it hard to focus on the story.
Now this as a story is the usual Ranma1/2 mega crossover AKA Ranma is somehow related to everyone. Let me make a guess as to what happens next. Ranma A: uses the light hawk wings in a battle or B: get's his hand on the Silver Imperium Crystal. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Star Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 01:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I got a question though. If Ryoko's been trapped inside of a cave, by Happosai, for over 300 years, (I'm guessing before either Ranma or Nodoka were even born) Then how can Nodoka know who Ryoko is?
Exactly how old is 'No-chan'? |
Reviewed By: prottoss [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2001 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read a few fanfics with happy's master, but this is a first one with a female version. I hope you continue this story further. |
