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| "The Nameless Youkai" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 ] | Reviewed By: BueFlame [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 18:59 CST
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Yay!1this is the fist time I've read your ficcy...and let me tell ya I LUUV it, it soo cool!!update soon!!^-^
| Reviewed By: katiepatie (not logged in) On: March 31, 2005 16:50 CST
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*walks in holding a cup of coffee* yay! another chappie! ^_^ now if only the lawn gnomes would leave me alone! *runs away screaming from lawn gnomes*
| Reviewed By: inubrat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this a is very neat story please post more soon.
| Reviewed By: bullssweetpea On: March 31, 2005 14:12 CST
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What is hiei going to do about this and what is Inuyasha going to do about hiei? I can't wait to see and I wonder how your going to bring it the Fox. Who was watching Inuyasha? Hiei or Naraku. Oh well I hope you put a new chapter up soon.
| Reviewed By: grapejellybean [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 09:37 CST
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Good start to your story. It is a very fast moving story. Keep up the hard work!
| Reviewed By: Me On: March 31, 2005 08:40 CST
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I really liked this chapter, but I felt kind of bad for Inuyasha. You really like putting him through hell, don't you? Anyway, I rate it a ten out of ten, keep up the good work.
| Title: the bommarang thang(lol)
Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 00:17 CST
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hirakutso i belive is how its spelled(but dont take my word for it i'm the 'baka onna whom CANNOT spell' but u can go to inuyashaworld dot com
| Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 15:30 CST
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yay another chappie! ^_^ keep it up and update soon!
| Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!!!! its a GREAT story!!!!
| Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 19:11 CST
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Wow. Uber long flashback, ne? But very nice job. If you keep chapters coming like this, you're going to spoil me. Not that there's anything wrong with that. One thing, though, when Sango gave Kagome her new hirikotsu(sp), kagome said "gomen, gomen nasai" Now either i'm missing something, or you really meant arigato, arigato gozimasu(again sp). But that was probably just a typo or something. Other than that, like i said, very nice job. I'm looking forward to the next chappie!
| Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 16:55 CST
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*rides in on a tricycle* wheeeee! ^_^ I looove it! great job update soon!
| Reviewed By: deafening silence (not signed in) On: March 25, 2005 14:56 CST
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I'm really enjoying your story so far. I am a *huge* fan of IY/YYH crossovers, but the fics i've come across lately are so incredible cliche, i was starting to dispair of ever finding an author with an ounce of creativity to his/her name. You, however, have renewed my faith in humanity. Instead of kagome being attacked by some youkai, and being rescued by hiei/youko/some other random yyh charcter, you've switched it up. Wonder how hiei's going to react to being rescued by some "baka ningen onna"? As far as that whole Inuyasha almost making it to america thing, is that because she would sit him straight through to the other side of the world? idk. Anyway,like i said. Your story is very well written so far, but there were just a few sentences that could be cleaned up a bit. Can't wait to see how you write the kag/hiei interaction, since, i think, that's one of the trickiest pairings to write w/out the characters going way OOC. As far as you picking up someone else's story, definately make every effort to contact him first, and give him time to reply! If, after three or four weeks, there's no response, then go with what Kouga's Hentai Lover suggested. That seems like a good plan to me. But i cannot stress enough the need to give credit to the original auther wherever possible. Just out of curiosity, which story were you planning on continuing anyway? Well, i've talked more that enough mby now, so i'll just say that i really loved your fic, and you need to update soon!
| Reviewed By: NinefootNick On: March 25, 2005 10:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story. I gave you all ten's because I purely enjoyed reading this story, The writing style was really good and your syntax is almost professional. And as far as this story goes on origionality, I have never seen a story follow like this one does, it is perhaps the most original and creative story I have seen. The spelling and grammer rating is possibly giving a little too much gratitude (lol jk). The two plotlines of Inuyasha and Yu Yu Hakusho fit togeather really well, you found a way to write this story so it is completly believable, part of this can be contributed to the fact that the two stories are naturally somewhat similar, but it takes a talented writer to fit the pieces togeather and make it believable. People spend one/third of their lives asleep, that averages to roughly fifty thousand hours, and your story makes every one of those hours seem like a waste of time. Thank you.
| Title: Really Good
Reviewed By: Kogas Hentai Luver [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 08:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed that. I've always liked Hiei/Kag pairings. The only question I have is about Inu almost making it to America. I didn't understand where that came from or why. Are they all in the present day or are they still in the Feudal Era? Maybe I'm getting ahead of myself and you'll clearify it in the next chappie ^_^. To answer your question: As an author myself, I know that I would be totally pissed off if someone just decided to continue a story I started, but hadn't updated in a while. You have to email the author and get permission first. If they don't respond to you, then you can rewrite her story idea, in your own words. But you have to give them credit for the original idea and that your fic was inspired by them. That really is the only way I can think of to not offend the author, even if they didn't respond, because it may come back to nip you in the ass down the road. Better to dot all your I's and cross all your T's first, ne. ^_^ Hope that helped. That's just my take on what you would like to do. CYA next chapter.
| Reviewed By: PrincessRock323 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool. Update please. And who is the Youkai Kagome saved? I wanna know! PLEASE UPDATE!
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