| "The Nameless Youkai" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] |
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Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heyy! It's me, again! Wow. I still love this story. And is it just me or is Keiko is treating like Yusuke as her possession and that she's acting like Kikyo? Both girls are females and wanted a NORMAL life/boyfriend. While both males are demons and love their first loves ... similar, right? Poor Kagome ... but she has experience with this, right? Once and it's still ... rememberable ... so yeah ... Damn; Keiko is acting like a bitch/slut/whore/etc! I don't like her (anymore). Ja Ne --> UPDATE SOON, DAMN!!! Oh, and for the record ... Keiko is sooooooo not sexy ... she's sleazy ... bit definitely NOT sexy.
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Title: i liked
Reviewed By: todavialoca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, i like how you spent the time to put in inu-yasha with great detail.. also how the 3 in YYH are attracted to kags, the only problem with this story..is that you updated like 4 months ago ..tear...hope to see it updated sone
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Title: i liked
Reviewed By: todavialoca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, i like how you spent the time to put in inu-yasha with great detail.. also how the 3 in YYH are attracted to kags, the only problem with this story..is that you updated like 4 months ago ..tear...hope to see it updated sone
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Reviewed By: sailorstormmaker On: November 14, 2006 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
girl you rock ! your stories are the best and i was hoping that you can help me which mine?
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just re-read this for the umpteenth time. It's one of my all-time favorites! It's been awhile since you added to it -- hope you get a chance to write more soon! Still hoping all 3 find find their soulmate in Kagome -- she's too awesome! Love your writing!
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Reviewed By: Naruto's girl On: October 24, 2006 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story! i've never read a fan fic like it, and i want you to update this as soon as possilbe onegai??? arigato!!!
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Title: please update
Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1 because the way you wrote itdraws you in 2 because purfect grammar 3 because it was very origanal and the first ive read a story like this 4 it so much fum trying to guess what happens next 5 because its one of the best stories ive ever read....... so please update soon......
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Reviewed By: PS On: September 28, 2006 15:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: heyyo On: September 28, 2006 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is good! i love ur story and you HAVE to update soon or else i'll....die!!! so please update!!
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Reviewed By: kyuubiflames On: September 25, 2006 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! that was amazing, i loved it so much, please update! Youre really skilled, i can tell by reding this, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 09:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! Can't read anymore the now cos i have homework to do (sucks, don't it?) but just wanted to review the now anyway! I really like where the stories going, but you have quite a few mistakes! Sometimes this could put readers off, so my advise to you is to use a spell checker, or properly proof read your work! That way you'll get loads more readers [and reviews!] Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 21:00 CDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Kage Otome (Shadow Maiden-NSI) On: September 21, 2006 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one hell of a chapter girl! I loved it! ^_^ all the sexual tension, sweet moments, sparring, playful scenes, and what's a story without them? And of course the envy and jealousy, the misunderstandings and mysteries...Keep up the good work, Tor, It was GREAT!!!
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Reviewed By: BlackRoseKnight On: September 20, 2006 22:35 CDT
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Wow, now that was one hell of a chapter. Your writing is getting better and better with each chapter (even tho it was damn awesome to begin with) I'm definitely seeing something brewing between Kegome and the guys. and omg keiko is just makin herself look worse and worse with each passing moment. i do have to say you pulled alot of punches with this one, TONs of funny moments and the story is picking up very nicely. I can definitely say this is my fave fanfic on here. and your the best author ;D. Keep the awesomeness coming. Gotta see what happens next *glues eyes to the screen*
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