| "Fraternization" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: lbyrnemac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoohoo. This looks promising and kinda kinky. More please.
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Reviewed By: jj On: May 01, 2005 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutley love this story. please update soon. please put in lots of lemon.
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 20:28 CDT
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Oh man, too funny. I almost got caught like that once - by my dad! Please continue because Edward deserves a real man, lol. Btw, I don't know if your ages and years are quite right, but I'm no expert.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 19:38 CDT
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Wow! It's so hard to find good FMA smut... and this is really good! Please, don't stop, I'm really enjoying this. Poor Ed, just can't seem to get a break! Roy needs to corner him good... Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: a non food On: April 07, 2005 09:59 CDT
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the repost for such evil teasing: no chapter=no review it will be held hostage until such demands are met. mwahahaha*gagcough* ahem... well there
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Reviewed By: Suki Itachi On: April 07, 2005 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More! I can't wait until you get the Full chapter up! ^^
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Reviewed By: Sekiseishi On: March 30, 2005 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you.
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Reviewed By: a non food On: March 27, 2005 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I really like how you got across the characters and their personalities. I hope you update soon. I'd like to see how the relationship between Ed, Roy and the 'Mustang' gets going.*tiny smirk*
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Reviewed By: megatrontinkerbell On: March 26, 2005 03:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good, please continue ^^
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Reviewed By: WrathOfPaine On: March 25, 2005 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story, I can't wait for the next part and hope you update soon. THIS STORY ROCKS!!!!!!! =]
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