| "Fraternization" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 16:55 CST
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It's good. Can't wait for you to update....
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Title: YOU CANT JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT?!?!?!?
Reviewed By: Roses-in-the-Dark [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU CANT JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!U-P-D-A-T-E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please.
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Reviewed By: forever broken 9nli) On: July 27, 2005 12:30 CDT
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this is a really good and cute story! I wish we would be able to see this kind of stuff in the show.. but unless somone like me is going to buy the show.. I don\\\'t think that\\\'s going to happen in a long long time.. anyways I really love the story! it also is very realistic! so please write further very soon! really keep up the good work because I would really love to read another good chapter about ed and roy!
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Reviewed By: lil' crazy head On: June 23, 2005 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic!! Please update soon!! 'kay? Ja'ne
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 01:40 CDT
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Yay! You wrote! I'm as happy as I would be, getting a letter from my overseas boyfriend. At least I would, if he weren't imaginary. LOL. Love the betting part. There's something about incorrigible friends betting on your lovelife that is so comedic.
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Reviewed By: LazyLogInMeandering On: June 02, 2005 07:37 CDT
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You should be glad you got this many reviews for your story! Some stories have over twenty LOOONNGG chapters, and they get about thirty reviews. And they're GOOD stories too! I swear to God (hehe, Roy) if you DON'T write more, I'll hunt you down and gut you.
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Reviewed By: nacht kind On: May 31, 2005 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
60.....SIXTY?!~ That's blackmail and really not cool. Who knows how long it will take for people to become interested in reading fanfiction and to then mozy to your story. Think of how unfair it is to everyone who has reviewed and must now wait, not even for the chapter to be written cause that's understandable, but for your ego to be satisfied! If it takes too long we might accidentally forget the name of the story! It's horrible! But I'll send a link to some friends and ask them to read and review....::grumble:: sixty....slavedriver..... But anyway, I like the story, it's cute and I really do hope you continue with it. Roy's character makes me laugh. ^^ Keep writting while you wait for those reviews, we don't want you to lose interest afterall! May the muses(along with sixty damn reviews) be with you!~Nacht
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Title: More por favor
Reviewed By: jricespet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 07:32 CDT
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I just like how that sounded... *clears throat* PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! *coughs softly* thank-you
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Reviewed By: Scyther_Devlin On: May 30, 2005 23:36 CDT
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HAHAHA!! this is so great!! Jean and Riza together...heheeh....wonder what's gonna happen in the restroom when roy goes to get ed............oh the possibilities!! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Scyther_Devlin On: May 30, 2005 11:33 CDT
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HAHAHAHA!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER IT'S AWSOME!! POOR JEAN...HAHHAHAHA!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
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Title: UPDATE!!!!
Reviewed By: ccam3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!
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Title: LOVE IT!!
Reviewed By: Scyther_Devlin On: May 28, 2005 20:59 CDT
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I love this fic it's great!! Poor Roy he's so funny!! the hummor in this fic is awsome! Please keep up the good work!!
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Title: This is bloody amazing
Reviewed By: jricespet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 06:09 CDT
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This is so awesome please write more I really like the way the plot is going. Have a wonderful summer vacation.
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Title: your not evil
Reviewed By: ccam3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your not evil...ur a GREAT writer but ur not evil...so just drop it...But for those of US who have seen the end of the FMA TV series,That is pure evil...EVIL!!!!!!!!but there is a movie.*fades into the drak*
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Title: Yes, you are evil.
Reviewed By: MacFukamachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, you are evil. Eeevvil. Really evil, to quote the movie "So I Married An Axe Murderer" Evil, like fruits of the devil. Love the Roy and Ed factor. Great characterizations, I can really see Ed and Roy reacting as they do in the story. More, please. oh evil mistriss.
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