| "Emerald Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am now reviewing also for all the -Kings and they all (like always) love the story, God-King wants more kinda twists, but in a good way, Shinning-King, Nacho-King, Toxic-Queen, and Bow-Queen, want more romance, and also, they want longer chaps. there i have reviewd for them and i edvise all that read this story to review. Majin_Broly took the time to write it, the least you can do is give your opinions and imput. thanx to the readers and passer-bys, if you can do that for Majin_Broly, i would be forever greatful. ^_^ and nightmaregod, thanx for telling your friends. ^_^
|
Reviewed By: nightmaregod On: April 19, 2005 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool works of creativity man. my other friends might find this interesting.
|
Reviewed By: BROLY_ROCKS On: April 18, 2005 02:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chap dude. this is one of the best stories i have ever read.
|
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awsome. please update whenever you can. ^_^
|
Reviewed By: noneofyourdamncrap On: April 16, 2005 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey he used Shadow-King's logo. you basterd. oh and this is yet agian still a good story. p.s. Shadow-King dont get mad at him please, he is a buddy of mine and ill talk to him. p.p.s good storys we want more.
|
Reviewed By: twackfackler On: April 14, 2005 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad i cant help but like this story. ^_^
|
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that last chap was what i was talkin bout. damn it was good. i cant wait to see the new one. ^_^ also some of the people that reviwed, cant make it anymore so i will reviw for them. they enjoyed this and the last chapter and want more...um...uh...fighting, f'ing, and dammit what was it...oh and more/new enemies. we also want to say that we think its kick ass that you are putting the series into one big broly story. keep it up. ^_^
|
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah i am with you on that. i would love to see more emotional type things. i cant explane it. you did a few chapters with almost just talking. that is what the show dose. you were able to put it all together. i dont want to sound like i am complanining, i just like the chapters with just talk and fighting. ^_^ i am sry if i sound like a prick. if you dont think it needs it, then dont listen to me. dont force yourself to change the story if YOU think it will be good. so once agian good story and update whenever you can.(and dont stress yourself) ^_^ bye
|
Reviewed By: noneofyourdamncrap On: April 10, 2005 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good one. lol more sex and more fighting and i would like to have more like emotion. you know like more things likehappy long talks and um other stuff.
|
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chap. lol that was funny as hell. it not a problem when you update, just update. you cant rush greatness. ^_^
|
Reviewed By: nightmaregod On: April 10, 2005 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude that scene was well ok, now for more action.
|
Title: :)
Reviewed By: DeMario On: April 09, 2005 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That battle in chapter 7 was the SHIZ-NITE!!! so detailed and breath taking I could see the fight as if i were watching a movie!
|
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes this is an awsome story. that we all want more of. ^_^
|
Title: Oh my god
Reviewed By: DeMario On: April 07, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is very good!I'm impresed and I'm not easily impresed.I'm not finished reading but I can tell this is gonna be sweet
|
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
firstly, great chapter, secondly, i like the emotion and the fighting (the emotion is cool), and therdly, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
|
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
